Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use the present tense consistently and make your answer more natural by saying 'I visit the library regularly to study and read books.' Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas.

예시: Yes, I visit the library regularly to study and read books because it provides a quiet environment.

제안: Avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'I usually study alone and read books to gain knowledge.'

예시: I usually study alone in the library and read books to gain knowledge and improve my understanding.

제안: Use past tense consistently and improve sentence clarity. For example, say 'I didn't go to the library in my area because there wasn't one, but I always went to the school library to study.'

예시: When I was a kid, I didn't have a library in my area, but I always went to the school library to study.

제안: Make your answer more natural and concise. Use linking words and correct grammar, for example, 'Nowadays, most Chinese students often go to the library to study alone and gain knowledge from books.'

예시: Nowadays, most Chinese kids often go to the library to study alone and gain knowledge from books.

× Yes, I visited the library regularly because of study and reading books.

✓ Yes, I visit the library regularly for studying and reading books.

The question is in present tense 'Do you often go to the library?', so the answer should also be in present tense. 'Visited' is past tense, which is inconsistent here. Also, 'because of study and reading books' is awkward; 'for studying and reading books' is more natural.

× I do many things like study, study alone in a library or readings books and get some knowledge from the library.

✓ I do many things like studying, studying alone in the library, reading books, and gaining knowledge from the library.

After 'like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form. 'Readings' is incorrect; the correct form is 'reading'. Also, 'a library' should be 'the library' because it refers to a specific place.

× When I was a kid I didn't go to the library because there is no library in my area where I stay, but in my school when I always go to the library for study.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because there was no library in the area where I lived, but at my school, I always went to the library to study.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the time is past ('when I was a kid'), verbs should be in past tense: 'was' instead of 'is', 'lived' instead of 'stay', 'went' instead of 'go'. Also, 'for study' should be 'to study'.

× Well, in this contemporary era, most of these students always go to the library for getting some knowledge from the books and studying alone and get some concentrate.

✓ Well, in this contemporary era, most students always go to the library to gain knowledge from books, study alone, and concentrate.

'For getting' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to gain'. 'Get some concentrate' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'concentrate'. Also, 'most of these students' is better as 'most students' for general statements.