Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Votre réponse est claire mais manque de fluidité naturelle et quelques erreurs grammaticales. Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus naturelles et évitez la répétition de "yes". Par exemple, commencez directement avec une phrase complète et utilisez des mots de liaison pour améliorer la cohérence.

예시: I often go to the library because it's a quiet and peaceful place where I can focus on my tasks. Usually, I visit twice a week to complete all my homework efficiently.

제안: Votre réponse est un peu redondante et manque de structure claire. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour organiser vos idées et évitez les répétitions comme "my homework, my task". Soyez plus précis et naturel dans votre expression.

예시: Usually, I do my homework and study for exams in the library. Recently, I have been preparing for my IELTS exam there and discussing study strategies with my peers to improve together.

제안: Votre réponse est bonne mais pourrait être améliorée en utilisant des phrases plus naturelles et en évitant des formulations maladroites comme "recommend for us how to do work". Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre le discours plus fluide.

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, there was a small library in my neighborhood which was my favorite place to meet friends and study together. It had many books, and a helpful teacher who guided us on how to study effectively and choose interesting books to read.

제안: Votre réponse manque de précision et contient des erreurs grammaticales comme "Chinese have has". Essayez d'exprimer votre opinion clairement avec des phrases correctes et évitez les généralisations sans preuve. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour structurer votre réponse.

예시: I am not sure about the exact habits of Chinese children, but I believe that many libraries exist in China. Generally, children there focus on academic success and probably use libraries frequently to support their studies.

× Yes, library is my best place when I can do all my tasks quietly and peacefully.

✓ Yes, the library is my best place when I can do all my tasks quietly and peacefully.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener, the definite article 'the' is required.

× So yes, I go often there twice a week to do all my homework.

✓ So yes, I often go there twice a week to do all my homework.

The adverb 'often' is incorrectly placed after the verb 'go'. In English, adverbs of frequency like 'often' usually come before the main verb.

× In the library, I do my homework, my task and I have recently attended the library to prepare for my IELTS exam and connect with my peers to have their opinions and prepare together.

✓ In the library, I do my homework, my tasks and I have recently attended the library to prepare for my IELTS exam and connect with my peers to have their opinions and prepare together.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple assignments. Using singular 'task' here is incorrect.

× I have recently attended the library to prepare for my IELTS exam and connect with my peers to have their opinions and prepare together.

✓ I have recently been attending the library to prepare for my IELTS exam and connect with my peers to have their opinions and prepare together.

The present perfect continuous tense 'have been attending' is more appropriate here to indicate an ongoing or recent repeated action rather than a single completed event.

× We had a lot of books in it and a good teacher there to recommend for us how to do work and how to choose maybe books to read.

✓ We had a lot of books in it and a good teacher there to recommend to us how to do work and how to choose books to read.

The verb 'recommend' is followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the person receiving the recommendation. 'For' is incorrect in this context.

× I believe that Chinese have has a lot of libraries and their children must attend them as they are really brilliant and they are known for their good Marks and prefer academic performance.

✓ I believe that Chinese people have a lot of libraries and their children must attend them as they are really brilliant and they are known for their good marks and preference for academic performance.

The phrase 'Chinese have has' is incorrect; 'Chinese people have' is correct. Also, 'Marks' should be lowercase 'marks', and 'prefer academic performance' should be 'preference for academic performance' to be grammatically correct.