Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your points. Also, be more confident and direct in your response. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details with linking words.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate. Moreover, it helps me to gather new ideas and prepare effectively for my exams.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more structured and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to studying and exams.

예시: Usually, I study for competitive exams such as AMCRE and PGI in the library. In the past, I also prepared extensively for government exams, which is why I frequently visit the library.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat unclear. Try to use the past tense consistently and organize your ideas logically. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'that stuff like that' and be more specific.

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, I used to go to the school library once a week during a designated period. We borrowed books and read them there, which helped me develop a habit of reading early on.

제안: Your answer is hesitant and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion confidently and use correct adverbs. Also, provide reasons to support your opinion with linking words.

예시: Although I am not certain, I believe Chinese children often visit libraries because they generally have strong reading skills and a keen interest in books.

× Guess I often go to the library.

✓ I guess I often go to the library.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'guess'. In English, sentences generally require an explicit subject. Adding 'I' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× And I do go to the library for practice of practice for my exams.

✓ And I do go to the library to practice for my exams.

The phrase 'practice of practice' is incorrect and redundant. The correct preposition to express purpose is 'to' followed by the verb 'practice'. Hence, 'to practice for my exams' is the correct form.

× I was preparing a lot at some time of my life for government exams.

✓ I prepared a lot at some time in my life for government exams.

The past continuous 'was preparing' is not appropriate here because the sentence refers to a general past period. The simple past 'prepared' is more suitable. Also, 'at some time of my life' should be 'at some time in my life' for correct preposition usage.

× When I was a kid, I go to the library in school.

✓ When I was a kid, I went to the library in school.

The main clause is in past tense ('was a kid'), so the verb 'go' should also be in past tense 'went' to maintain tense consistency.

× We had a period in week for library.

✓ We had a period in the week for the library.

The phrase 'in week' is missing the article 'the' and 'for library' needs 'the' as well. Also, 'period in the week' is the correct expression.

× At that time we were visiting the library.

✓ At that time we visited the library.

The past continuous 'were visiting' suggests an ongoing action, but here a simple past 'visited' is more appropriate to describe a habitual or completed action in the past.

× We we took books from that place at that time.

✓ We took books from that place at that time.

There is a repeated word 'we'. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence. The verb 'took' is correctly in past tense.

× We get some issued balance and that stuff like that.

✓ We got some issued balance and stuff like that.

The verb 'get' should be in past tense 'got' to match the past context. Also, 'that stuff like that' is redundant; 'stuff like that' suffices.

× Actually, I don't know about that exactly, do they or not?

✓ Actually, I don't know exactly about that, whether they do or not.

The question tag 'do they or not?' is incorrectly placed after a statement. Rephrasing to 'whether they do or not' is grammatically correct and clearer.

× But I think so they must be going to library oftenly because they have good reading skills and interested in reading.

✓ But I think they must be going to the library often because they have good reading skills and are interested in reading.

The adverb 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct form is 'often'. Also, 'going to library' needs the article 'the'. The phrase 'interested in reading' requires the verb 'are' before it to be grammatically correct.