Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to speak more fluently and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'you know'. Use simple, clear sentences and directly answer the question. Also, ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and coherent.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading various books. For example, I like books about science and cosmetics, which really interest me. Visiting the library helps me learn new things and relax.

제안: Avoid repeating filler phrases like 'you know' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific details about your activities.

예시: In the library, I usually focus on my studies. First, I decide which books I want to read, then I explore those books carefully. After that, I start reading and try to understand the topics in depth.

제안: Work on grammar, especially past tense usage, and avoid filler words. Provide a clear and direct answer with supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: No, when I was a kid, there were not many facilities like libraries at my school. Therefore, I usually read books given by my teachers. Sometimes, I also read books that my friends had.

제안: Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'thank you for the question' and filler words. Give a direct answer with clear supporting details and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I believe all children should have access to libraries. In my community, children receive books as they grow up to encourage a love of reading, which helps their development.

× I often, uh, visited library

✓ I often visit the library

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'visited' when the present tense 'visit' is appropriate to express a habitual action. Use the simple present tense for regular activities.

× visited library

✓ visited the library

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× I saw, you know, reading books

✓ I enjoy reading books

The phrase 'I saw reading books' is incorrect and unclear. To express enjoyment of reading, use the present simple tense 'I enjoy reading books'.

× books about, you know, cosmetics and other different books that really excites me

✓ books about cosmetics and other different subjects that really excite me

The verb 'excites' should agree with the plural subject 'books'. Also, 'books about cosmetics and other different subjects' is clearer and more grammatically correct.

× So I run a lot of things from I'm in the right body

✓ So I learn a lot of things from being in the right environment

The phrase is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Run' is incorrect here; 'learn' fits the context. 'I'm in the right body' is likely a misstatement; 'being in the right environment' is more appropriate.

× I also enjoy, you know, leading some

✓ I also enjoy, you know, reading some

The word 'leading' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'reading'.

× In the rivalry, I frequently, you know, want to focus and concentrate

✓ In the library, I frequently, you know, want to focus and concentrate

The word 'rivalry' is a mispronunciation or typo; it should be 'library'. Also, 'the library' requires the definite article.

× what I do is just, you know, thinking about the things that I'm gonna do

✓ what I do is just, you know, think about the things that I'm going to do

After 'what I do is', the base form of the verb 'think' should be used, not the gerund 'thinking'. Also, 'gonna' is informal; 'going to' is preferred.

× start understanding the topic that I have I

✓ start understanding the topic that I have

The extra 'I' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect.

× No, when I were a kid, we do have a much facilities

✓ No, when I was a kid, we did not have many facilities

The subject 'I' requires 'was' not 'were'. Also, 'do have' is incorrect in past context; 'did not have' is correct. 'Much facilities' should be 'many facilities' because 'facilities' is countable.

× we do have a much facilities

✓ we did not have many facilities

'Facilities' is a countable plural noun, so 'many' is the correct quantifier, not 'much'. Also, the sentence is negative, so 'did not have' is appropriate.

× if they have libraries in the form

✓ if they have libraries in the school

The phrase 'in the form' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'in the school' is more appropriate. Also, 'libraries' is plural and needs no article here.

× when I was kidding, I just used to read the books that teachers used to give me

✓ when I was a kid, I just used to read the books that teachers used to give me

'Kidding' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'kid' to refer to a child. The rest of the sentence is correct in past tense.

× I also used to, you know, explore all also allowance, you know, my friends, the book that they had

✓ I also used to, you know, explore all the books my friends had

The phrase is confusing and contains unnecessary words like 'allowance'. The pronoun usage is incorrect; 'the books my friends had' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I think that's the most thing that I use it

✓ I think that's the main thing that I used

The verb 'use' should be in past tense 'used' to match the past context. 'Most thing' is incorrect; 'main thing' or 'most important thing' is better.

× I thank you so much for the question

✓ Thank you so much for the question

The phrase 'I thank you' is grammatically correct but less natural in spoken English; 'Thank you' is more common and appropriate.

× I don't know much about China, but as much as I believe all our kids deserve to have library deserve to have where they live

✓ I don't know much about China, but I believe all kids deserve to have a library where they live

The sentence has redundancy and incorrect article usage. 'Library' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'all our kids' is changed to 'all kids' for clarity.

× deserve to have library deserve to have where they live

✓ deserve to have a library where they live

The noun 'library' requires the indefinite article 'a' when mentioned for the first time.

× kids are given the books when they grow up to make sure that they, you know, see them the character of reading

✓ kids are given books when they grow up to make sure that they, you know, develop the habit of reading

The phrase 'see them the character of reading' is incorrect and unclear. 'Develop the habit of reading' is a correct and natural expression.

× so that you can help them go growing up

✓ so that it can help them grow up

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; 'it' refers to the reading habit. Also, 'go growing up' is incorrect; 'grow up' is the correct phrase.