Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response and explain your reason clearly using correct sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually use electronic resources, which are more convenient for me.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetition and grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about your activities. Avoid repeating phrases and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

예시: In the library, I usually explore articles and read books that interest me. However, I find online resources more comfortable to use.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use proper tenses. Provide specific details about your experiences in the library as a child.

예시: Yes, I often went to the library at my school when I was a kid. We held meetings there, and I made friends with whom I worked on some projects.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear opinion or state that you are unsure, and avoid repeating phrases. Use correct grammar and sentence structure.

예시: I'm not sure about other Chinese kids, but when I was a child, I often went to the library and worked on interesting projects with my friends there.

× No I don't because I'm using electronic resource, so I'm going to the library really, but I have always exist with some resources.

✓ No, I don't because I use electronic resources, so I don't really go to the library, but I have always existed with some resources.

The phrase 'I'm using' is incorrectly used for a habitual action; the simple present 'I use' is appropriate. 'Electronic resource' should be plural as it refers to multiple resources. 'I'm going to the library really' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'I don't really go to the library'. 'I have always exist' is grammatically incorrect; the correct form is 'I have always existed'. These corrections align the sentence with proper verb forms and pluralization.

× No I don't because I'm using electronic resource, so I'm going to the library really, but I have always exist with some resources.

✓ No, I don't because I use electronic resources, so I don't really go to the library, but I have always existed with some resources.

The term 'electronic resource' should be plural 'electronic resources' because it refers to multiple items. Using the correct plural form is essential for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× I usually do at library, explore some articles, explore some artists, I read some books which was interesting for me or which is interesting for me.

✓ I usually go to the library, explore some articles, explore some artists, and read some books which are interesting to me.

The phrase 'I usually do at library' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'I usually go to the library'. 'Which was interesting' should be 'which are interesting' to agree with the plural 'books'. Also, 'interesting for me' is better expressed as 'interesting to me'. These changes correct verb usage and agreement.

× I usually do at library, explore some articles, explore some artists, I read some books which was interesting for me or which is interesting for me.

✓ I usually go to the library, explore some articles, explore some artists, and read some books which are interesting to me.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used; the correct preposition is 'to' in 'go to the library'. Also, 'interesting for me' should be 'interesting to me' as 'to' is the correct preposition to express interest.

× I usually do at library, explore some articles, explore some artists, I read some books which was interesting for me or which is interesting for me.

✓ I usually go to the library, explore some articles, explore some artists, and read some books which are interesting to me.

The verb 'was' should be 'are' to agree with the plural noun 'books' and the present tense context. Maintaining consistent tense is important for clarity.

× But in reality online resources badge for me, it's more comfortable.

✓ But in reality, online resources are better for me; they are more comfortable.

The original sentence is unclear and structurally incorrect. 'Badge' is likely a typo or misuse; replacing it with 'are better' clarifies meaning. Adding a semicolon and proper subject-verb agreement improves sentence structure.

× Yes, when I was a kid I was going to the library often because it was in my school.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library because it was in my school.

The past continuous 'was going' is less appropriate here than the simple past 'went' for habitual past actions. 'Often went' correctly expresses repeated past activity.

× We had some meetings there and I had friends from library and we have we had some startups from there and it.

✓ We had some meetings there, and I had friends from the library, and we had some startups from there.

The phrase 'friends from library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'have we had' is incorrect and redundant; 'we had' suffices. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and it', which should be removed for clarity.

× I don't know how can I know what are they doing, what are doing? Chinese cats.

✓ I don't know how I can know what they are doing, what are Chinese kids doing?

The original sentence has incorrect word order and pronoun usage. The correct question form is 'how I can know' in indirect speech. 'What are they doing' should be 'what they are doing' in indirect speech. 'Chinese cats' is a typo and should be 'Chinese kids'.

× But I know that when I was a kid I was going to the library and I was doing some interesting projects with them.

✓ But I know that when I was a kid, I went to the library and did some interesting projects with them.

The past continuous 'was going' and 'was doing' are less appropriate for habitual past actions; simple past 'went' and 'did' are better to express repeated or completed actions in the past.