Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'oranges or man'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, start by stating your general habit, then explain reasons or exceptions.

예시: I don't often go to the library because I'm not very interested in books. However, sometimes I visit the library on the second floor of my school to borrow books for my teacher or classmates.

제안: Avoid informal or unclear expressions like 'like normal people' and 'joined my friend to sleep'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clear, specific details. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

예시: I usually go to the library to borrow books for my teacher or classmates because I don't enjoy reading much. Sometimes, I also spend time resting there with my friends.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer. Use linking words like 'but' correctly and avoid repetition. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

예시: I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred studying in my room. However, I know that the library is a very good place to study.

제안: Avoid incorrect or unclear phrases like 'Chinese brand', 'study obsessor', and 'waist up book'. Use appropriate vocabulary and grammar. Provide a clear and coherent answer with linking words and specific details.

예시: Yes, many Chinese students at my school are very dedicated to studying. They often go to the library to borrow books and study during their free time.

× I have visited some library uh, oranges or man because I have to uh get some book for my teacher or my classmate which is in the second floor of my school.

✓ I have visited some libraries, uh, or places because I have to get some books for my teacher or my classmates who are on the second floor of my school.

The word 'some' should be followed by plural nouns when referring to countable items, so 'some library' should be 'some libraries' and 'some book' should be 'some books'. Also, 'classmate' should be plural 'classmates' to match the context. 'Which is in the second floor' should be 'who are on the second floor' because 'classmates' are people and 'on' is the correct preposition for floors.

× I have visited some library uh, oranges or man because I have to uh get some book for my teacher or my classmate which is in the second floor of my school.

✓ I have visited some libraries, uh, or places because I have to get some books for my teacher or my classmates who are on the second floor of my school.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to floors of a building; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'which' should be 'who' when referring to people (classmates).

× Personally I don't go to library like normal people, I don't like reading books so I go there just to take some book for my teacher or my classmate when they need it.

✓ Personally, I don't go to the library like normal people. I don't like reading books, so I go there just to take some books for my teacher or my classmates when they need them.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'some book' should be plural 'some books' to match the context. 'Classmate' should be plural 'classmates' and 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun.

× And most of the time I joined my friend to sleep also.

✓ And most of the time I join my friends to sleep as well.

The verb tense should be present tense 'join' to match the context. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to indicate more than one person. 'Also' is better replaced with 'as well' for naturalness.

× Personally I don't really a book which fans are reading books so book is not my thing.

✓ Personally, I am not really a book fan; reading books is not my thing.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'A book which fans are reading books' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses correct quantifiers and structure.

× When I was a kid I always spend time doing my schoolwork at the room instead and but the library is a very good place to study also.

✓ When I was a kid, I always spent time doing my schoolwork in my room instead, but the library is also a very good place to study.

The preposition 'at the room' is incorrect; it should be 'in my room'. The verb tense should be past tense 'spent' to match 'when I was a kid'. The conjunctions are corrected for clarity.

× Definitely, I have a lot of Chinese brand at my school and they are a study obsessor.

✓ Definitely, I have a lot of Chinese friends at my school and they are study obsessors.

'Brand' is incorrect; it should be 'friends'. 'A study obsessor' should be plural 'study obsessors' to agree with 'they'.

× They were addicted to studying.

✓ They are addicted to studying.

The present tense 'are' is more appropriate here to describe a habitual action or characteristic.

× They always go to the library to borrow a waist up book.

✓ They always go to the library to borrow a wide variety of books.

'A waist up book' is incorrect and unclear. The phrase is corrected to 'a wide variety of books' to convey the intended meaning.

× They never miss a class and every time they are free they always go to the library to buy a book or.

✓ They never miss a class, and every time they are free, they always go to the library to borrow a book or study.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'or'. It is corrected to a complete thought. Also, 'buy a book' is likely incorrect in this context; 'borrow a book' fits better with library usage.