Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you could improve by making it more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "not many convenient places near my location" and "ebooks are accessible and easier to store" which could be combined more smoothly. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas better.

예시: No, I rarely visit the library because there aren't many nearby. Instead, I prefer ebooks since they're more accessible and easier to store on my devices.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and natural phrasing. The sentence "It gives me great insight than any other person could" is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Also, avoid redundancy like "Moreover, library is convenient to visit." Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples.

예시: I usually go to the library to research topics or products that I can't find online. For example, I once found detailed information about a rare book there, which helped me a lot.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "I found it they are cheaper to borrow in library." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about your preferences.

예시: Yes, I often visited the library as a child because borrowing books was cheaper than buying them. Additionally, I enjoyed the feel of physical books more than ebooks.

제안: Your answer is honest but lacks specificity and contains a generalization that could be inappropriate. Instead, try to provide a more balanced opinion or explain why you think so, using linking words and avoiding stereotypes.

예시: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but I think many do visit libraries because education is highly valued in China, and libraries provide useful resources for studying.

× Moreover, library is convenient to visit.

✓ Moreover, the library is convenient to visit.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' in this context is incorrect.

× I used to borrow many books because I found it they are cheaper to borrow in library.

✓ I used to borrow many books because I found they are cheaper to borrow in the library.

The phrase 'in library' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'it' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence clarity. Correct preposition usage requires 'in the library'.

× I used to borrow many books because I found it they are cheaper to borrow in library.

✓ I used to borrow many books because I found they are cheaper to borrow in the library.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the place. Omitting it is grammatically incorrect.

× Moreover, I like the feel of a physical book rather than ebook.

✓ Moreover, I like the feel of a physical book rather than an ebook.

The noun 'ebook' requires an article 'an' because it is a singular countable noun. Omitting the article leads to incorrect grammar.