Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally good but try to avoid minor grammatical errors like 'help' instead of 'helps'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' or 'so that'. This will make your answer more natural and coherent.

예시: Yes, I often go to libraries, especially during my exam period or when I need to reference books for my studies because I find the library very peaceful, which helps me stay focused compared to reading at home. Additionally, I enjoy exploring academic journals and resources that are not always available online.

제안: Your answer covers the points well but watch out for subject-verb agreement errors like 'allow' instead of 'allows' and 'provide' instead of 'provides'. Also, try to use linking words such as 'moreover' or 'in addition' to connect your ideas better.

예시: Most of the time, I go to the library to study or do research for my assignments. I really like the peaceful environment there because it allows me to concentrate without any distractions. Moreover, the library provides access to academic journals and reference materials that are essential for my classwork. Occasionally, I also join group study sessions with my friends.

제안: Your answer is clear but improve grammatical accuracy by using 'the library' and 'relied' for past tense. Also, use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to make your answer more coherent.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because there wasn't a proper library in my hometown. Most of the time, I relied on my school textbooks and whatever books I could find at home. However, over time, I developed more interest in reading and started using the library more often.

제안: Your answer is informative but incomplete and has grammatical errors like 'children's' instead of 'children' and missing ending. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words such as 'therefore' or 'because' properly. Also, use plural forms correctly and finish your sentences.

예시: It depends on the child's background. In big cities, children have easy access to public and school libraries, so they often visit for studying or borrowing books. However, in rural areas, libraries may not be well equipped, so kids rely more on school textbooks or online resources. Overall, Chinese kids are encouraged by their parents and teachers to spend time in the library because it helps improve their knowledge and academic performance.

× I find the library very peaceful which help me stay focused compared to reading at home.

✓ I find the library very peaceful which helps me stay focused compared to reading at home.

The subject 'which' refers to 'library' (singular), so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number. In English, singular subjects take singular verbs ending with 's' in the present tense.

× I also enjoy exploring academic journals and resources that not always available online.

✓ I also enjoy exploring academic journals and resources that are not always available online.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' before 'not always available'. The correct structure requires the verb 'are' to link the subject and predicate. This is a common omission error in English.

× Most of the time, I go to library to study or do research for my assignment.

✓ Most of the time, I go to the library to study or do research for my assignment.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× I really like the peaceful environment there because it allow me to concentrate without any distraction.

✓ I really like the peaceful environment there because it allows me to concentrate without any distraction.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'allows' to agree in number. Singular subjects require verbs with an 's' ending in the present tense.

× Besides, library provide access to academic journals and reference material that are essential for my classwork.

✓ Besides, the library provides access to academic journals and reference material that are essential for my classwork.

The singular noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' and the verb 'provides' to agree in number. Singular subjects take singular verbs ending with 's' in the present tense.

× Occasionally, I also joined group study session with my friends.

✓ Occasionally, I also join group study sessions with my friends.

The question is in present tense, so the answer should also be in present tense. 'Joined' is past tense; 'join' is present tense. Also, 'session' should be plural 'sessions' to match 'group study' activities generally.

× No, I didn't go to library when I was a child because there wasn't a proper library in my hometown.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because there wasn't a proper library in my hometown.

The noun 'library' is singular and countable, so it requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× Most of the time I rely on my school textbooks and whatever books I could find at home.

✓ Most of the time I relied on my school textbooks and whatever books I could find at home.

The sentence refers to past time ('when I was a child'), so the verb 'rely' should be in past tense 'relied' to maintain tense consistency.

× However, overtime I developed more interest in reading and started using library more often.

✓ However, over time I developed more interest in reading and started using the library more often.

The phrase 'overtime' should be two words 'over time' meaning gradually. Also, 'library' is singular countable and requires the definite article 'the'.

× It depends on child's background.

✓ It depends on the child's background.

The singular noun 'child' requires the definite article 'the' to specify which child's background is meant.

× In big cities, children's have easy access to public and school libraries, so they often visit for studying or borrowing books.

✓ In big cities, children have easy access to public and school libraries, so they often visit for studying or borrowing books.

'Children's' is possessive form; the plural noun 'children' is correct here as the subject. Using 'children's' is incorrect in this context.

× However, in rural areas, library may not be well equipped, so kids rely more on school textbooks or online resources.

✓ However, in rural areas, the library may not be well equipped, so kids rely more on school textbooks or online resources.

'Library' is singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library in rural areas.

× Overall, Chinese kids are more encouraged by their parents or teacher to spend time in library because.

✓ Overall, Chinese kids are more encouraged by their parents or teachers to spend time in the library because.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match 'parents' and 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should be completed for clarity.