Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar, for example, say 'a variety of books' instead of 'variety of books'.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading a variety of books that interest me. Additionally, I write poems and like to collect new vocabulary there, which helps improve my writing skills.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly, and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, say 'quiet environment' instead of 'quiet environment' and 'vocabulary' instead of 'vocabularies'.

예시: I usually go to the library to do my assignments and read books because it provides a quiet environment free from distractions. Sometimes, I bring my course books as I prefer studying there. Moreover, I collect new vocabulary to help me write poems.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Make sure to finish your sentences and use correct forms like 'a variety of books' and 'joke books'. Also, add linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I used to visit the library quite often when I was a kid because I enjoyed reading books during my free time. I especially liked reading a variety of books such as storybooks and joke books.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct plural forms like 'children' and verb agreement like 'visit'. Also, improve sentence flow by using linking words and clearer expressions.

예시: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries, especially in urban areas where access is easier. Libraries are considered valuable places for studying and gaining knowledge, and schools encourage students to visit and borrow books.

× I like reading variety of books which appeals to me a lot.

✓ I like reading a variety of books which appeals to me a lot.

The phrase 'variety of books' requires the article 'a' before 'variety' to be grammatically correct. Without 'a', the phrase is incomplete and incorrect.

× I love collecting vocabularies so that I can help myself for writing.

✓ I love collecting vocabulary so that I can help myself with writing.

The word 'vocabulary' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'vocabularies'. Also, the preposition 'with' is appropriate after 'help myself' in this context.

× I usually go to the library because I love doing my assignments and reading books in library because it keeps me quiet environment and it is free from distractions.

✓ I usually go to the library because I love doing my assignments and reading books in the library because it provides a quiet environment and is free from distractions.

The phrase 'in library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'keeps me quiet environment' is incorrect; it should be 'provides a quiet environment' to convey the intended meaning.

× Sometimes I also bring my course book there because I like reading in library environment.

✓ Sometimes I also bring my course book there because I like reading in the library environment.

The phrase 'in library environment' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library' to be grammatically correct.

× I used to go to the library for reading variety of books like story books, jokes books.

✓ I used to go to the library for reading a variety of books like story books and joke books.

The phrase 'variety of books' requires the article 'a' before 'variety'. Also, 'jokes books' should be 'joke books' as 'joke' is an adjective here describing the type of books.

× Sometimes I actually.

✓ Sometimes I actually do.

The sentence 'Sometimes I actually.' is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence fragment. Adding 'do' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× Yes, many Chinese children's frequently visits libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier.

✓ Yes, many Chinese children frequently visit libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier.

The word 'children's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be the plural noun 'children'. Also, 'visits' should be 'visit' to agree with the plural subject 'children'.

× Libraries are often seen valuable places for studying and expanding knowledge, and schools encourage students to go to the library and bring some book.

✓ Libraries are often seen as valuable places for studying and expanding knowledge, and schools encourage students to go to the library and bring some books.

The phrase 'seen valuable places' is missing the preposition 'as'. Also, 'some book' should be pluralized to 'some books' to be grammatically correct.