Library— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you often go to the library?
수험생
These days I don't visit library regularly because I have ebooks and I can afford buying books by myself.
시험관
What do you usually do in the library?
수험생
I prefer libraries for studying because it's very quiet there so I can concentrate on my studying tasks and also I sometimes borrow books there when I can't find them anywhere else.
시험관
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
수험생
Yes, I liked a visiting library than I was a child because there were so many interesting books for me which I couldn't get by myself and my parents didn't buy me them.
시험관
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
수험생
I don't know about China. A lot of the things because I I'm not an expert in this, but I think that they go there regularly.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
점수: 75.0제안: Ваш адказ натуральны, але можна зрабіць яго больш эфектыўным, пазбягаючы паўтораў і паляпшаючы граматычную структуру. Напрыклад, замяніць "I have ebooks and I can afford buying books by myself" на больш зразумелую і лаканічную фразу.
예시: These days, I don't visit the library often because I have access to ebooks and can buy books on my own.
What do you usually do in the library?
점수: 85.0제안: Ваш адказ добра структураваны, але можна палепшыць сувязь паміж сказамі, выкарыстоўваючы злучальныя словы, каб зрабіць адказ больш лагічным і плаўным.
예시: I prefer libraries for studying because it's very quiet there, which helps me concentrate on my tasks. Additionally, I sometimes borrow books when I can't find them elsewhere.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
점수: 70.0제안: Ваш адказ мае некаторыя граматычныя памылкі і не зусім натуральны. Рэкамендуецца палепшыць граматыку і зрабіць сказ больш плаўным і лагічным.
예시: Yes, I enjoyed visiting the library as a child because it had many interesting books that I couldn't get on my own, and my parents didn't buy them for me.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
점수: 60.0제안: Ваш адказ не зусім зразумелы і мае паўторы. Рэкамендуецца адказваць больш канкрэтна і пазбягаць паўтораў, выкарыстоўваючы злучальныя словы для лепшай сувязі.
예시: I'm not an expert on this topic, but I believe that many Chinese children visit libraries regularly.
문법
× These days I don't visit library regularly because I have ebooks and I can afford buying books by myself.
✓ These days I don't visit the library regularly because I have ebooks and I can afford buying books by myself.
The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect here.
× Yes, I liked a visiting library than I was a child because there were so many interesting books for me which I couldn't get by myself and my parents didn't buy me them.
✓ Yes, I liked visiting the library when I was a child because there were so many interesting books that I couldn't get by myself and my parents didn't buy me any.
The phrase 'a visiting library' is incorrect; 'visiting' should be used as a verb, not a noun here. Also, 'than I was a child' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child' to indicate time. The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used after 'buy me'; 'any' is more appropriate here. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.
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