Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and clear. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and unnecessary fillers. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't often go to the library because there isn't a public library in my town. So, I usually read books online instead.

제안: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence. Avoid hesitations and incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to add supporting details. Be specific about your activities in the library.

예시: When I was in college, I usually searched for books that helped me with my assignments. Sometimes, I also studied quietly there to prepare for exams.

제안: Provide a complete and clear answer. Start with a direct response, then explain your situation with specific details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library as a kid because there was no library in my town. Instead, my school gave us books to read at home.

제안: Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I think'. Give a confident and clear answer with specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because there are many libraries in China. They enjoy reading their favorite books there, which helps improve their knowledge.

× As of now I don't have any time of going to the library to research or read books because to be honest we don't have any Public Library here in our town and it's so sad to say this and although.

✓ As of now I don't have any time to go to the library to research or read books because, to be honest, we don't have any public library here in our town and it's sad to say this.

The phrase 'time of going' is incorrect; the correct preposition after 'time' when referring to an activity is 'to' followed by the base verb form. Also, 'Public Library' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. The sentence was also corrected for clarity and redundancy.

× As of now I don't have any time of going to the library to research or read books because to be honest we don't have any Public Library here in our town and it's so sad to say this and although.

✓ As of now I don't have any time to go to the library to research or read books because, to be honest, we don't have any public library here in our town and it's sad to say this.

The conjunction 'and although' at the end is incorrect and unnecessary. 'Although' is a subordinating conjunction that should introduce a clause, not end a sentence. Removing it improves sentence structure.

× And I SH I could remember when I was still in my college years. I usually search for books which are which were beneficial to our subject assignment. And also although it's funny to say this but sometimes.

✓ I think I can remember when I was still in my college years. I usually searched for books that were beneficial to our subject assignments. Also, although it's funny to say this, sometimes...

The phrase 'And I SH I could remember' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'I think I can remember' is more appropriate. The sentence starting with 'And also although' is incorrect; 'although' should introduce a clause and not be combined with 'and also'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually search for books which are which were beneficial to our subject assignment.

✓ I usually searched for books that were beneficial to our subject assignments.

Since the speaker refers to past college years, the past tense 'searched' is appropriate instead of present tense 'search'. Also, 'which are which were' is redundant; 'that were' is clearer. 'Subject assignment' should be plural if referring to multiple assignments.

× And also although it's funny to say this but sometimes.

✓ Also, although it's funny to say this, sometimes...

The sentence is incomplete and has redundant conjunctions 'and also although' and 'but'. Using 'also' or 'although' alone is sufficient. The sentence should be completed for clarity.

× No, we don't. We don't have library here in our town so I did not experience going to the library when I was a kid, but instead we we we were given books for us to.

✓ No, we don't. We don't have a library here in our town, so I did not experience going to the library when I was a kid. Instead, we were given books to read at home.

'We don't have library' is missing the article 'a' before 'library'. The sentence was also fragmented and incomplete; it was corrected for clarity and completeness. Repetition 'we we we' was removed.

× No, we don't. We don't have library here in our town so I did not experience going to the library when I was a kid, but instead we we we were given books for us to.

✓ No, we don't. We don't have a library here in our town, so I did not experience going to the library when I was a kid. Instead, we were given books to read at home.

The noun 'library' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a' when singular and unspecified. The sentence was also completed for clarity.

× I think so. I think in China there are a lot of libraries and also children are fond of going to the library to read books. So I think there's a lot of libraries in China that you can read your favorite books and.

✓ I think so. I think in China there are a lot of libraries, and children are fond of going to the library to read books. So, I think there are many libraries in China where you can read your favorite books.

The phrase 'a lot of libraries' is correct but 'there's a lot of libraries' is incorrect because 'libraries' is plural and requires 'there are'. Also, 'that you can read your favorite books and' is incomplete and awkward; 'where you can read your favorite books' is more appropriate. The sentence was restructured for clarity.