Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "I don't often go" and "usually" together. Also, the last sentence is incomplete and unclear. Try to finish your thoughts fully and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually have a lot of work to do at home, which is more convenient. However, when I was a child, I visited the library regularly because I enjoyed reading different kinds of books there.

제안: Your answer has good content but some phrases are unclear or awkward, like "plan to study every soon" and "quick environment." Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I usually go to the library to practice my English skills, such as reading books and listening to podcasts. I do this because I plan to study abroad soon and want to improve my language level before I go. Moreover, the quiet environment in the library helps me concentrate better.

제안: Your answer is good with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, you could add a linking word to connect your ideas more smoothly and check small grammar points like "when I was child" should be "when I was a child."

예시: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a child because I loved reading adventure books, especially those inspired by anime stories. These books were exciting and sparked my imagination, so I wanted to visit the library regularly.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid incomplete or confusing sentences. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: No, I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library. In Mongolia, children usually visit libraries only when they have school assignments or need a quiet place to study. I imagine it is similar in China because many students prefer using digital resources or studying at home nowadays.

× Nowadays, I prefer studying in a quick and comfortable environment, such as my room or.

✓ Nowadays, I prefer studying in a quiet and comfortable environment, such as my room.

The word 'quick' is incorrectly used to describe 'environment'. The correct adjective is 'quiet' to describe a calm and peaceful environment suitable for studying. This is an incorrect use of adjectives (ID 18).

× I do this because I plan to study every soon and I want to improve my language level before I go.

✓ I do this because I plan to study very soon and I want to improve my language level before I go.

The phrase 'every soon' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'very soon' to indicate near future. This is a future tense issue (ID 7).

× Yes, I often went to the library when I was child because I loved reading adventure books, especially those inspired by anime stories.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a child because I loved reading adventure books, especially those inspired by anime stories.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a' before 'child'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× I'm from Mongolia and have not said they children are usually visit libraries only when they have school assigned or need a quick place to study.

✓ I'm from Mongolia and have heard that children usually visit libraries only when they have school assignments or need a quiet place to study.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. Correct sentence structure and word choice are needed. 'Have not said they children are usually visit' is incorrect; it should be 'have heard that children usually visit'. Also, 'school assigned' should be 'school assignments' and 'quick place' should be 'quiet place'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).

× I imagine it might be similar in China as many students nowadays prefer using digital resource or studying at home instead of going to be today's.

✓ I imagine it might be similar in China as many students nowadays prefer using digital resources or studying at home instead of going to the library.

The phrase 'going to be today's' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'going to the library'. Also, 'digital resource' should be plural 'digital resources'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and quantifiers (IDs 11 and 14).