Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น การใช้ 'because' เพื่ออธิบายเหตุผล นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำกริยาที่ถูกต้องและเหมาะสม เช่น 'I have gone to the library every day since my first year at university because I like reading.'

예시: Yes, I do. I have gone to the library every day since my first year at university because I enjoy reading.

제안: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้สมบูรณ์ เช่น ใช้ 'I usually search for interesting books because I like to research new topics and read in a quiet environment.' นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดแยกประโยคสั้นๆ ที่ไม่สมบูรณ์

예시: I usually search for interesting books because I like to research new topics and read in a quiet environment.

제안: ควรใช้กาลเวลาที่ถูกต้องและโครงสร้างประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ เช่น ใช้ 'Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because I made appointments with my friends to study and share tutoring to prepare for exams.' นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because I made appointments with my friends to study and share tutoring to prepare for exams.

제안: ควรใช้กาลเวลาที่เหมาะสมและโครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจน เช่น 'Yes, they do. I have some Chinese friends who like reading books, and they go to the library every day to improve their skills and study new lessons.' หลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

예시: Yes, they do. I have some Chinese friends who like reading books, and they go to the library every day to improve their skills and study new lessons.

× Yes I yes I do. I went to the library every day since I study in university year one until year 4 the because I like to reading.

✓ Yes, I do. I have gone to the library every day since I started studying at university from year one until year four because I like reading.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'went' with 'since' which requires present perfect tense 'have gone'. Also, 'study' should be in past tense 'started studying' to match the time frame. 'Like to reading' is incorrect; it should be 'like reading' because 'like' is followed by a gerund.

× Yes I yes I do. I went to the library every day since I study in university year one until year 4 the because I like to reading.

✓ Yes, I do. I have gone to the library every day since I started studying at university from year one until year four because I like reading.

'Like to reading' is incorrect because after 'like' we use the gerund form 'reading' not the infinitive plus gerund. The correct form is 'like reading'.

× I usually searching my interesting book.

✓ I usually search for my interesting books.

'Usually' requires the base form of the verb 'search' not the present participle 'searching'. Also, 'search' is usually followed by 'for' when indicating looking for something. 'Book' should be plural 'books' if referring to more than one.

× I like to research. New book and. Reading in quiet environment.

✓ I like to research new books and read in a quiet environment.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connection. 'Research' should be followed by the object 'new books'. 'Reading in quiet environment' should be connected with 'and' and include the article 'a' before 'quiet environment'.

× Yes I do. Once I were a kid I I usually went to library because I make up an appointment with my friend to study and to sharing tutor for prepare examination in.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because I made an appointment with my friend to study and share tutoring to prepare for examinations.

'Yes I do' is incorrect for past time; it should be 'Yes, I did'. 'Once I were a kid' should be 'When I was a kid' because 'were' is incorrect for singular first person. 'Make up an appointment' should be 'made an appointment' in past tense. 'To sharing tutor' should be 'to share tutoring'. 'Prepare examination in' should be 'prepare for examinations'.

× Yes I do. Once I were a kid I I usually went to library because I make up an appointment with my friend to study and to sharing tutor for prepare examination in.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because I made an appointment with my friend to study and share tutoring to prepare for examinations.

Prepositions are incorrectly used: 'went to library' should be 'went to the library'; 'prepare examination in' should be 'prepare for examinations'.

× Yes they did because I have some some Chinese friends, they like to reading the book and of course they went to library every day to improve the the skill and studying a new lesson.

✓ Yes, they do because I have some Chinese friends; they like reading books and, of course, they go to the library every day to improve their skills and study new lessons.

'Yes they did' is past tense but the context suggests present tense 'Yes, they do'. 'Like to reading' should be 'like reading'. 'Went to library' should be 'go to the library'. 'The skill' should be 'their skills'. 'Studying a new lesson' should be 'study new lessons' to maintain parallel structure and correct tense.