Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói "I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at home. Also, libraries are not common in my school."

예시: I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at home. Also, libraries are not common in my school, so I rarely have the chance to visit one.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lỗi như "a new books" hay "I reading books". Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Ví dụ: "In the library, I usually find new books that I have never read before. I also read and prepare for my school tests there."

예시: In the library, I usually find new books that I have never read before. Additionally, I read and prepare for my school tests there.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: "When I was a kid, I often went to the library at my primary school about two or three times a week."

예시: When I was a kid, I often went to the library at my primary school about two or three times a week.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, đồng thời trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ: "I think Chinese kids don't often go to the library nowadays because reading books is less common. Instead, they usually use social media, YouTube, or mobile phones for entertainment."

예시: I think Chinese kids don't often go to the library nowadays because reading books is less common. Instead, they usually use social media, YouTube, or mobile phones for entertainment.

× Personally, I'm not often go to the library because I prefer reading books or study by myself at home and library is not really common in my school so.

✓ Personally, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books or studying by myself at home and the library is not really common in my school.

The phrase 'I'm not often go' is incorrect because 'am' should not be used with the base form 'go'. Instead, the simple present negative form 'do not go' is correct. Also, 'study' should be in the gerund form 'studying' after 'prefer'. Additionally, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Suggestions: Use 'do not' for negation in simple present tense and use gerunds after verbs like 'prefer'. Use articles appropriately.

× In the library I usually find a new books that I had never read.

✓ In the library, I usually find new books that I have never read.

The phrase 'a new books' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'books' is plural. It should be either 'a new book' or 'new books' without 'a'. Also, 'had never read' should be 'have never read' to match the present perfect tense used for experiences. Suggestions: Match singular/plural forms correctly and use present perfect for experiences.

× Of course I reading books or I usually go to the library to get preparing for my tests in school.

✓ Of course, I read books or I usually go to the library to prepare for my tests in school.

The phrase 'I reading books' is incorrect because the verb 'read' should be in the base form or simple present tense 'I read'. Also, 'to get preparing' is incorrect; it should be 'to prepare'. Suggestions: Use base form or simple present for habitual actions and use 'to' + base verb for purpose.

× Not often. I when I was a kid, I often go to the library in my primary school about two or three times a week.

✓ Not often. When I was a kid, I often went to the library in my primary school about two or three times a week.

The phrase 'I often go' is present tense but the context is past ('when I was a kid'), so it should be 'I often went'. Suggestions: Use past tense verbs when talking about past events.

× I think Chinese kid recently not often go to the library because reading books is not common.

✓ I think Chinese kids recently do not often go to the library because reading books is not common.

'Chinese kid' is singular but the meaning refers to children in general, so it should be plural 'Chinese kids'. Also, 'recently not often go' is awkward; 'do not often go recently' is better. Suggestions: Use plural nouns when referring to groups and correct word order for adverbs.

× Recently kid often use their social media or use the YouTube or mobile phone to entertain.

✓ Recently, kids often use social media, YouTube, or mobile phones to entertain themselves.

'Kid' should be plural 'kids' to match the general subject. 'Use the YouTube' is incorrect; 'YouTube' does not need 'the'. Also, 'mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' to match 'kids'. 'To entertain' is incomplete; it should be 'to entertain themselves'. Suggestions: Use plural nouns for general statements, omit articles with proper nouns like 'YouTube', and complete reflexive actions properly.