Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách diễn đạt không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh dùng những cụm từ không phù hợp như "I am an actual person" và nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books at home or watching movies when I have free time.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "remission".

예시: In the library, I usually read fairy tale stories that my mother used to tell me when I was a child, which brings back many fond memories.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và câu văn rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lỗi sai như "Is were" và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I definitely went to the library with my dad when I was a kid. He bought me many comic books, which were really fun, and I also made friends with other children there who shared books with me.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: I think it depends, but most children in Chinese cities often go to the library. However, I live in a rural area where there are fewer good facilities, so I don't have many opportunities to visit the library.

× Not yet. I don't like going to the library. I am an actual person so I don't like reading and when I have free time most of the time I spend on reading or watching some entertaining.

✓ Not yet. I don't like going to the library. I am a practical person, so I don't like reading, and when I have free time, I usually spend it reading or watching something entertaining.

The phrase 'an actual person' is incorrect; 'a practical person' fits better. 'Most of the time I spend on reading or watching some entertaining' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'I usually spend it reading or watching something entertaining.' The quantifier 'some entertaining' is incorrect; 'something entertaining' is appropriate.

× I often read some fairy tale stories which most of the story my mother told for me when I was a child and it's a remission of my.

✓ I often read some fairy tale stories, most of which my mother told me when I was a child, and they are a reminder of my childhood.

The phrase 'most of the story my mother told for me' is incorrect; it should be 'most of which my mother told me.' The preposition 'for' is wrongly used here. Also, 'remission of my' is incorrect; 'reminder of my childhood' is the correct expression.

× Definitely yes. I went to the library with my dad and he bought for me a lot of comic books. Is were really fun and I also made friends with lots of people in the library and they also give me some.

✓ Definitely yes. I went to the library with my dad, and he bought me a lot of comic books. They were really fun, and I also made friends with lots of people in the library, and they also gave me some.

The phrase 'he bought for me' should be 'he bought me.' 'Is were really fun' is incorrect; it should be 'They were really fun.' The verb 'give' should be in past tense 'gave' to match the past context.

× I think it depends, but for most Chinese in the city they often go to the library. But I live in rural areas so I don't have a lot of good condition to read books more often in the library, especially in some room.

✓ I think it depends, but most Chinese people in the city often go to the library. But I live in a rural area, so I don't have good conditions to read books more often in the library, especially in some rooms.

'Most Chinese' should be 'most Chinese people' to indicate plural. 'Rural areas' should be 'a rural area' to match singular context. 'A lot of good condition' is incorrect; it should be 'good conditions.' 'Some room' should be 'some rooms' to indicate plural.