Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas (quiet and comfortable environment) and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, use more precise vocabulary, for example, 'I visit the library about four times a week because it offers a peaceful atmosphere that helps me focus. Additionally, I enjoy browsing a wide range of books there.'

예시: I visit the library about four times a week because it offers a peaceful atmosphere that helps me focus. Moreover, I enjoy browsing a wide range of books, which broadens my knowledge and relaxes me.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve coherence. For example, say 'I usually review my textbooks because the library provides a quiet and comfortable environment that helps me concentrate. Besides, I often read fiction or nonfiction books to relax.'

예시: I usually review my textbooks because the library provides a quiet and comfortable environment that helps me concentrate. Besides, I often read fiction or nonfiction books to relax after studying.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has tense inconsistency and could be more natural. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'other books' and improve sentence flow with linking words. For example, 'Yes, I did. When I was a child, I was very interested in various books, so my parents often took me to the library where I could freely explore and relax.'

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I was very interested in various books, so my parents often took me to the library where I could freely explore and relax.

제안: Your answer contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Yes, they do. Chinese children are very interested in various subjects, especially science and history. The library has an abundance of resources on these topics, and parents are very supportive, encouraging their children to read more often.'

예시: Yes, they do. Chinese children are very interested in various subjects, especially science and history. The library has an abundance of resources on these topics, and parents are very supportive, encouraging their children to read more often.

× I usually review on my textbooks because library provides the quiet and comfortable environment for me to concentrate more and besides I also usually reading some fiction books or nonfiction books which makes me relaxed.

✓ I usually review my textbooks because the library provides a quiet and comfortable environment for me to concentrate more and besides I also usually read some fiction books or nonfiction books which make me relaxed.

The verb 'review' should not be followed by the preposition 'on' in this context; it should be 'review my textbooks'. Also, 'reading' should be in the base form 'read' after 'usually'. Additionally, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' before it. The verb 'makes' should agree with the plural subject 'books', so it should be 'make'.

× Yes, I do. When I was a kid, I was very interested in all kinds of books, so my parents always took me to the library where I can explore other books with freedom and relax.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I was very interested in all kinds of books, so my parents always took me to the library where I could explore other books with freedom and relax.

The answer to a past tense question should be in past tense, so 'Yes, I do' should be 'Yes, I did'. Also, 'can' should be changed to 'could' to maintain past tense consistency in the relative clause.

× Yes they do. Chinese kids are very interested in all kinds of books, especially science and history where library have an abundance of resource of them and their parents are very supportive of it and support them to read books more often.

✓ Yes, they do. Chinese kids are very interested in all kinds of books, especially science and history where the library has an abundance of resources on them and their parents are very supportive of it and support them to read books more often.

The noun 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. 'Resource' should be plural 'resources' to match 'an abundance of'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. The preposition 'of' should be 'on' to correctly indicate the subject matter of the resources.