Library— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you often go to the library?
수험생
Actually, I don't go to the library very often because I find it a bit boring. I mean, I prefer reading books on the Internet because it offers a wide range of materials for free, which is really convenient.
시험관
What do you usually do in the library?
수험생
Well, I don't often go to the library, but if I have to guess, I think that I might read books there or sometimes I might took out take out my homework to finish.
시험관
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
수험생
Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was young because there wasn't a library in my hometown. So if people wanted to borrow books, they would have to travel to the city centre, which was quite far from my hometown. And because of this, I usually read books at home and borrow.
시험관
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
수험생
Well, I don't think Chinese kids love going to the library because nowadays those children often like playing video games with their friends instead of going to the library and reading those boring books.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
점수: 75.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh dùng từ lặp lại như "because" nhiều lần và có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
예시: I don't visit the library frequently since I find it less engaging. Instead, I enjoy reading e-books online because they provide a vast selection of free resources, which is very convenient for me.
What do you usually do in the library?
점수: 60.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, tránh lỗi như "might took out" và sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.
예시: Although I rarely visit the library, I usually read books there or sometimes take my homework to complete in a quiet environment.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung tốt nhưng phần cuối hơi mơ hồ và chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ lặp lại và kết thúc câu rõ ràng hơn.
예시: I didn't visit the library as a child because there wasn't one in my hometown. People had to travel to the city center to borrow books, so I mostly read books at home that my family lent me.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
점수: 65.0제안: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ mang tính đánh giá như "boring books" và cố gắng sử dụng từ ngữ trung lập hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I believe many Chinese children prefer playing video games with their friends nowadays, so they might visit the library less frequently than before.
문법
× sometimes I might took out take out my homework to finish
✓ sometimes I might take out my homework to finish
The modal verb 'might' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. 'Took' is past tense, but after 'might' the correct form is 'take'.
× And because of this, I usually read books at home and borrow.
✓ And because of this, I usually read books at home and borrow them.
The sentence is incomplete because the verb 'borrow' requires an object. Adding 'them' clarifies what is borrowed, making the sentence grammatically correct.
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