Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'real Roman' nên là 'real room' hoặc 'quiet place'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I usually go to the library about twice a week because I enjoy reading new books, especially novels and science magazines. It is a peaceful and quiet place where I can concentrate and expand my knowledge on various topics that interest me.

제안: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng như 'play' thay vì 'place' và thiếu mạo từ 'a' trước 'favorite topic'. Hãy chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I usually enjoy reading new books in the library, especially novels and science magazines. It is a peaceful and quiet place where I can fully concentrate and broaden my understanding of my favorite topics, such as technology and history.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có phần không rõ ràng và câu cuối cùng 'Business.' không liên quan và gây nhầm lẫn. Bạn nên tránh những câu không liên quan và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because I enjoyed exploring topics that interested me, such as technology and history. Sometimes, my best friend and I would go there together to study and discuss what we learned. Also, my family encouraged me to expand my knowledge and keep up with the latest developments.

제안: Bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ như 'in Vietnamese is' nên là 'in Vietnam are', 'various topic' nên là 'various topics', và 'safety their curiosity' không đúng. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn.

예시: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but as a Vietnamese, I believe many children in Vietnam are very curious and love reading. Because of this, they often visit the library to enjoy books and explore various topics that interest them. Libraries are great places for kids to learn new things and satisfy their curiosity.

× I usually go to the library about twice a week because I enjoy reading new books, especially novels and science magazine.

✓ I usually go to the library about twice a week because I enjoy reading new books, especially novels and science magazines.

The word 'magazine' should be plural 'magazines' to agree with 'novels' and to correctly refer to multiple items. This is a singular and plural issue.

× It's a peaceful and real Roman where can concentrate and expand my knowledge on various topic that interests me.

✓ It's a peaceful and real room where I can concentrate and expand my knowledge on various topics that interest me.

The word 'Roman' is incorrect; it should be 'room' to make sense. Also, 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to match 'various'. 'Interests' should be 'interest' to agree with plural 'topics'. This involves incorrect use of adjectives and plural forms.

× I usually enjoy reading new books in the library, especially novels and science magazines.

✓ I usually enjoy reading new books in the library, especially novels and science magazines.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× It is a peaceful and quiet play where I can fully concentrate and broaden my understanding of favorite topic that interests me, such as technology and history.

✓ It is a peaceful and quiet place where I can fully concentrate and broaden my understanding of favorite topics that interest me, such as technology and history.

The word 'play' is incorrect; it should be 'place'. Also, 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to match 'favorite' and 'interest' should be plural form 'interest' to agree with plural 'topics'. This is incorrect use of adjectives and plural forms.

× Sometimes my best friend and I would go there together to study and discuss what we learned. Business.

✓ Sometimes my best friend and I would go there together to study and discuss what we learned. My family helped me expand my knowledge and keep up with the latest developments.

The sentence fragment 'Business.' is unclear and seems misplaced. It should be removed or integrated properly. Also, 'keep up the latest development' should be 'keep up with the latest developments' to be grammatically correct. This involves past tense and preposition usage.

× Because of this, they often visit the library to enjoy books and explore various topic that interest them.

✓ Because of this, they often visit the library to enjoy books and explore various topics that interest them.

The word 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to agree with 'various' and 'interest' should be plural form 'interest' to agree with plural 'topics'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Libraries are great place for kids to learn new things and safety their curiosity.

✓ Libraries are great places for kids to learn new things and satisfy their curiosity.

'Place' should be plural 'places' to agree with 'Libraries'. 'Safety' is incorrect; the correct word is 'satisfy'. This is incorrect use of adjectives and word choice.