Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear reason for your answer.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I am very busy with work these days. Besides, I don't enjoy reading many books, so I rarely find time to visit.

제안: Improve your answer by organizing your ideas clearly and using linking words. Also, correct grammar mistakes and be specific about your preferences.

예시: Usually, I read historical books and sometimes fairy tales. Apart from these, I also enjoy autobiographies; for example, one of my favourites is "The Story of My Life" by Helen Keller.

제안: Focus on using correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details linked logically.

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library with my father because he loves reading and is also a writer. I enjoyed going with him and reading books there.

제안: Provide a more developed answer with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your response coherent and avoid vague phrases like "not sure."

예시: It depends on the children. Some Chinese kids enjoy going to the library to read and study, while others prefer playing or engaging in other activities.

× No, I don't like to go to library because nowadays I'm very busy though in my work so I don't get enough time to go to library and also I don't read, don't like to read so many books.

✓ No, I don't like to go to the library because nowadays I'm very busy with my work so I don't get enough time to go to the library and also I don't read, don't like to read so many books.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'busy though in my work' is incorrect; it should be 'busy with my work' to use the correct preposition.

× No, I don't like to go to library because nowadays I'm very busy though in my work so I don't get enough time to go to library and also I don't read, don't like to read so many books.

✓ No, I don't like to go to the library because nowadays I'm very busy with my work so I don't get enough time to go to the library and also I don't read, don't like to read so many books.

The preposition 'though in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to express being occupied by work is 'busy with my work'.

× Usually I read some historical books and sometimes it would be a fairy tales.

✓ Usually I read some historical books and sometimes it would be fairy tales.

'Fairy tales' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the article usage.

× A apart from this I also love to read autobiographies and one of the one of the favorite autograph biography is The Story of My Life by Helen Keller.

✓ Apart from this, I also love to read autobiographies and one of my favorite autobiographies is The Story of My Life by Helen Keller.

The phrase 'A apart from this' is incorrect; 'Apart from this' is correct. Also, 'one of the one of the favorite autograph biography' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'one of my favorite autobiographies'. 'Autograph biography' is incorrect; the correct term is 'autobiography'.

× Of course, when I was a kid, I often go to the library with my father because he's a fond of reading books.

✓ Of course, when I was a kid, I often went to the library with my father because he's fond of reading books.

The verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to match the past time frame 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'he's a fond' is incorrect; it should be 'he's fond' without the article 'a'.

× Of course, when I was a kid, I often go to the library with my father because he's a fond of reading books.

✓ Of course, when I was a kid, I often went to the library with my father because he's fond of reading books.

The article 'a' before 'fond' is incorrect; 'fond' is an adjective and does not require an article.

× He is al also a writer. So he went to the library and I go. I would go with along with him and also read some books.

✓ He is also a writer. So he went to the library and I went. I would go along with him and also read some books.

The phrase 'I go' should be in past tense 'I went' to match the past context. 'I would go with along with him' is redundant; 'I would go along with him' is correct. Also, 'al' is a typo and should be 'also'.

× Not sure because it depends on kids.

✓ I'm not sure because it depends on the kids.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb; adding 'I'm' completes the sentence. Also, 'depends on kids' is better as 'depends on the kids' to specify the group.