Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer deer bichihdee, helber, ug songolt, bas ug helber deer anhaarah heregtei. Jishee ni, "I used to go to the library when I was a child to do my homework and read interesting books. Now, I am very busy, so I rarely go, but I hope to visit again soon." gej helj bolno.

예시: I used to visit the library often as a child to complete my homework and enjoy reading interesting books. However, now I am quite busy with my studies and other activities, so I rarely have time to go. I hope to find time to visit the library again in the near future.

제안: Answer deer todorhoi, oilgomjtoi ug songolt heregtei. Link hiih ug, helber deer anhaarah heregtei. Jishee ni, "When I was a teenager, I usually did my homework and read interesting books in the library because it helped me improve my memory and knowledge." gej helj bolno.

예시: When I was a teenager, I usually went to the library to do my homework assigned by teachers and to read interesting books. This helped me improve my memory and gain more knowledge.

제안: Answer deer helber, ug songolt, bas todorhoi ug heregtei. Jishee ni, "Yes, I often went to the library as a child because I found it very interesting and it helped me organize my studies." gej helj bolno.

예시: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a child because I found it very interesting. It also helped me organize my study materials and improve my learning.

제안: Answer deer ug songolt sain baina. Gexdee ug helber, duusgalt deer anhaarah heregtei. Jishee ni, "Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries, especially in cities where libraries are easily accessible. They provide a quiet place for studying and a variety of books for school and personal interests. For example, during weekends and holidays, many kids attend reading programs or borrow books." gej helj bolno.

예시: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries, especially in urban areas where access is easier. Libraries offer a quiet environment for studying and a wide selection of books that support both schoolwork and personal interests. For example, during weekends and holidays, many children participate in reading programs or borrow books to read at home.

× When I was a child I used to go to the library in order to doing my some homework and read that interesting books.

✓ When I was a child I used to go to the library in order to do some homework and read those interesting books.

The phrase 'in order to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'my some homework' is incorrect; 'some homework' is sufficient as 'homework' is uncountable. 'That interesting books' should be 'those interesting books' because 'books' is plural and requires the plural demonstrative pronoun 'those'.

× Now I just really busy and I can't go delivery oven but if I pray I will be.

✓ Now I am just really busy and I can't go to the library, but if I try, I will be able to.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' to link the subject and adjective 'busy'. 'Go delivery oven' is incorrect; likely intended 'go to the library'. 'If I pray' should be 'if I try' to make sense in context. The phrase 'I will be' is incomplete; it should be 'I will be able to' or similar.

× During the teenager time, I usually do in the library, do some homework as the teachers give me and we did some interesting books in order to make good memory and good responsible for intelligence and it helps me memorize it lot of things.

✓ During my teenage years, I usually went to the library to do some homework assigned by my teachers, and we read some interesting books to create good memories and develop responsibility and intelligence; it helped me memorize a lot of things.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues: 'During the teenager time' should be 'During my teenage years'. 'I usually do in the library' is incomplete; it should specify what is done. 'Do some homework as the teachers give me' should be 'do homework assigned by my teachers'. 'We did some interesting books' is incorrect; 'read some interesting books' is correct. The phrase 'make good memory and good responsible for intelligence' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'create good memories and develop responsibility and intelligence'. 'It helps me memorize it lot of things' should be 'it helped me memorize a lot of things'.

× Yes, I always got went to library when I was a kid because when I was a kid it was the most interesting thing and it helps me organize and some good backup lorries.

✓ Yes, I always went to the library when I was a kid because it was the most interesting thing and it helped me organize and have some good backup stories.

'Got went' is incorrect; only 'went' is needed for past tense. 'To library' requires the definite article 'the library'. 'It helps me' should be past tense 'it helped me' to match the past context. 'Some good backup lorries' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'backup stories' or 'backup materials' is more appropriate.

× Yes, many Chinese children frequently visit libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier. Libraries provide a good environment for studying and offer a wide range of books that support their schoolwork and personal interest. For example, during weekends our holidays, it's come to see kids attending reading programs or borrowing books for.

✓ Yes, many Chinese children frequently visit libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier. Libraries provide a good environment for studying and offer a wide range of books that support their schoolwork and personal interests. For example, during weekends and holidays, you can see kids attending reading programs or borrowing books.

'During weekends our holidays' is incorrect; it should be 'during weekends and holidays'. 'It's come to see kids' is ungrammatical; 'you can see kids' or 'it is common to see kids' is correct. 'Personal interest' should be plural 'personal interests' to match 'schoolwork' and general meaning. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected for clarity and grammar.