Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying "I don't usually go to libraries, but on weekends I usually go," you can say "I don't often go to libraries during the week; however, I visit on weekends when I need to read stories or find articles."

예시: I don't often go to libraries during the week; however, I visit on weekends when I need to read stories or find articles.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to organize your answer logically. Also, be more specific about what you read and why. For example, you can say, "In the library, I usually read books, stories, and articles. Sometimes, I also read newspapers to gain more knowledge about current events."

예시: In the library, I usually read books, stories, and articles. Sometimes, I also read newspapers to gain more knowledge about current events.

제안: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "honestly speaking." Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific. For example, "When I was a child, I wasn't interested in reading books and didn't know much about them. However, my school had library classes where I read some stories, although I didn't enjoy going there."

예시: When I was a child, I wasn't interested in reading books and didn't know much about them. However, my school had library classes where I read some stories, although I didn't enjoy going there.

제안: Make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words and avoid repetition. Be specific and clear. For example, "Whether Chinese kids go to the library often depends on the individual's interest in reading. I believe this is true for kids everywhere, regardless of language or culture."

예시: Whether Chinese kids go to the library often depends on the individual's interest in reading. I believe this is true for kids everywhere, regardless of language or culture.

× I'm not very keen of reading books.

✓ I'm not very keen on reading books.

The correct preposition to use with 'keen' is 'on', not 'of'. The phrase should be 'keen on' followed by a noun or gerund.

× I go to library on weekends.

✓ I go to the library on weekends.

When referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required before the noun.

× Library I often read books, stories and find articles and sometime I read newspapers 'cause they told me to gather more knowledge about something.

✓ In the library, I often read books, stories, and find articles. Sometimes I read newspapers because they told me it helps to gather more knowledge about something.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and run-on structure. Starting with 'In the library' clarifies the location. Also, 'sometimes' is the correct adverb form, and 'because' is more formal than ''cause'.

× and sometime I read newspapers

✓ and sometimes I read newspapers

'Sometimes' is the correct adverb form; 'sometime' is an adjective or noun meaning 'at some unspecified time'.

× Honestly speaking in my childhood I don't have knowledge about the books and I'm I have no interest on reading the books.

✓ Honestly speaking, in my childhood I didn't have knowledge about books and I had no interest in reading books.

The sentence refers to past time ('in my childhood'), so past tense verbs 'didn't have' and 'had' should be used. Also, the preposition 'in' is correct with 'interest'.

× I have no interest on reading the books.

✓ I have no interest in reading books.

The correct preposition to use with 'interest' is 'in', not 'on'. Also, 'books' does not need 'the' here as it is general.

× But in my school there is some classes of library there I read some stories and on there I don't like to go.

✓ But in my school, there were some library classes where I read some stories, and I didn't like going there.

Since the time is past, 'there were' is correct. 'Some classes of library' is better as 'library classes'. Also, 'I don't like to go' should be 'I didn't like going' to match past tense and natural phrasing.

× It depends on the person if he wants to like the read the books so they go in library.

✓ It depends on the person; if he wants to read books, then he goes to the library.

The phrase 'wants to like the read the books' is incorrect. It should be 'wants to read books'. Also, 'go in library' should be 'go to the library'.

× so they go in library.

✓ so they go to the library.

The correct preposition with 'go' and a place is 'to', and 'the' is needed before 'library'.

× I don't think like it depends on the person or kids, not a specific language or culture.

✓ I don't think so; it depends on the person or kids, not on a specific language or culture.

The phrase 'I don't think like' is incorrect; 'I don't think so' is appropriate. Also, 'depends on' requires the preposition 'on' before 'a specific language or culture'.

× Person go to libraries, everybody goes.

✓ People go to libraries; everybody goes.

'Person' is singular; the plural form 'people' should be used to match the plural verb 'go' and the context.