Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In your answer, try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'I go there to reading the book or do some exercise with my friend,' say 'I go there to read books or do exercises with my friends.' Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to about 3-4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library after school to read books or study with my friends. Sometimes, I borrow books to read at home because the library has a good selection.

제안: Try to avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'read a book,' you can say 'I usually read books or do assignments with my classmates because the library has many books I like.'

예시: I usually read books or do assignments with my classmates in the library because it has many books that I enjoy.

제안: Focus on correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons. For example, say 'When I was a kid, I went to the library only once or twice a month because my school library did not have many books I liked.'

예시: When I was a kid, I went to the library only once or twice a month because my school library did not have many books that interested me.

제안: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. For example, say 'In my opinion, Chinese children often go to the library because parents encourage reading to improve learning skills and flexibility.'

예시: In my opinion, Chinese children often go to the library because their parents encourage them to read books to improve their learning skills and flexibility.