Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có nhiều từ ngập ngừng như "uh" và "yeah". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên hoàn chỉnh, tránh bỏ dở giữa chừng.

예시: I used to go to the library often last year because I needed a quiet place to study for my English test. However, now I rarely go since I have finished preparing.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngập ngừng như "uh", "umm" và "you know". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác hơn.

예시: In the library, I usually spend my time studying English, especially practicing listening and reading skills. I prefer to study alone because it helps me concentrate better.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều từ ngập ngừng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: To be honest, I rarely went to the library as a child. I only visited once during a school trip to the nearest library. I became more familiar with libraries when I was in high school and university.

제안: Bạn nên tránh nói lặp từ và sử dụng nhiều từ ngập ngừng. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Ngoài ra, bạn nên trả lời đúng câu hỏi về trẻ em Trung Quốc thay vì nói về trẻ em Việt Nam.

예시: I think Chinese children do not often go to the library at a young age because their parents prefer them to study at home with family support.

× Well, I went to the library very often one year ago because I needed the quiet place to, uh, learn the English test.

✓ Well, I went to the library very often one year ago because I needed a quiet place to, uh, study for the English test.

The phrase 'the quiet place' is incorrect because it implies a specific known place, but here it should be a general place, so 'a quiet place' is correct. Also, 'learn the English test' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'study for the English test' because you prepare for a test rather than learn it.

× So I would say I went quite frequently one year ago, but now I rarely go to the library because I finished my.

✓ So I would say I went quite frequently one year ago, but now I rarely go to the library because I have finished my studies.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'I finished my.' It needs a complete object, such as 'studies.' Also, 'finished' is past tense, but since the effect continues to the present, present perfect 'have finished' is more appropriate.

× Well, I mostly, uh, spend my time, uh, learning, preparing the Interstate, uh, for example, uh, from the listening or reading, umm, the English lessons.

✓ Well, I mostly, uh, spend my time, uh, learning and preparing for the IELTS, for example, by listening or reading English lessons.

'Preparing the Interstate' is incorrect; it should be 'preparing for the IELTS' (International English Language Testing System). Also, 'from the listening or reading' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by listening or reading.'

× And most of the time I learned, uh, on my own.

✓ And most of the time I learn, uh, on my own.

Since the student is describing habitual actions in the present, the present tense 'learn' is appropriate rather than past tense 'learned.'

× I'm to be honest, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid or I just went on a, a school trip to go the, the, the nearest library, uh, to my school.

✓ To be honest, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, except I just went on a school trip to the nearest library to my school.

'I'm to be honest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'To be honest.' Also, 'to go the nearest library' is incorrect; it should be 'to the nearest library.' The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yeah. So, uh, you know, when I was in high school or the university, I, I just know the library.

✓ Yeah. So, you know, when I was in high school or university, I just knew the library.

'I just know the library' is incorrect because 'know' is present tense; past tense 'knew' is needed to match 'when I was.' Also, 'the university' can be simplified to 'university' unless referring to a specific one.

× Well, I think as the young age, the, the children in Vietnam, they, they do not go to library, uh, quite often because, umm, their parents, umm, uh, expect them to be at home and, you know, just to learn with uh, them and the people, umm.

✓ Well, I think at a young age, children in Vietnam do not go to libraries quite often because their parents expect them to be at home and, you know, just to study with them and other people.

'As the young age' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'at a young age.' 'The children' can be simplified to 'children.' 'Go to library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to libraries' (plural). Also, 'learn with them and the people' is vague; 'study with them and other people' is clearer.