Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: សូមប្រើកាលបរិច្ឆេទត្រឹមត្រូវ និងកែសម្រួលវាក្នុងរយៈពេលបច្ចុប្បន្ន។ ការប្រើប្រាស់ពាក្យ "went" ជាមួយ "often" គួរត្រូវបានកែទៅជា "go" ដើម្បីបង្ហាញពីសកម្មភាពដែលកើតឡើងជាប្រចាំ។ ការប្រើពាក្យ "results" មិនត្រឹមត្រូវក្នុងបរិបទនេះទេ។ សូមប្រើពាក្យ "resources" ជំនួស។

예시: Yes, I often go to the library when I am at university because I need to complete many assignments and read a lot of books. The library is my first choice because it is quiet and has a good environment for studying. Also, it has many useful resources that help me understand the subjects better.

제안: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគត្រឹមត្រូវ និងកាត់បន្ថយការប្រើពាក្យមិនចាំបាច់។ ការប្រើប្រាស់ "for do my assignment" គួរត្រូវបានកែទៅជា "to do my assignments"។ ការប្រើពាក្យ "restart" មិនសមរម្យក្នុងបរិបទនេះទេ។ សូមប្រើពាក្យ "review" ឬ "relearn" ជំនួស។

예시: I usually go to the library to do my assignments and read books because there are many books available. Also, I can review what I didn't understand before. Moreover, the environment is very good for studying.

제안: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគត្រឹមត្រូវ និងពាក្យត្រឹមត្រូវ។ ការប្រើ "really go" គួរត្រូវបានកែទៅជា "didn't go" ដើម្បីបង្ហាញពីអតីតកាល។ ពាក្យ "outspoke" មិនត្រឹមត្រូវទេ។ សូមប្រើ "books"។

예시: When I was young, I didn't go to the library often because my home was far from the library. Also, the library at my school did not have many books to read, so I usually read books at home.

제안: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគត្រឹមត្រូវ និងកាត់បន្ថយការប្រើពាក្យមិនចាំបាច់។ ការប្រើ "school line" មិនត្រឹមត្រូវទេ។ សូមប្រើ "school life"។ ការប្រើ "more mostly" មិនត្រឹមត្រូវ។

예시: I think most Chinese kids often go to the library because their school life is very busy and they need to do a lot of research. Therefore, many Chinese children spend time in the library.

× Yes, I often went to the library when I was at university because I need to complete many assignments and read a lot of book.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was at university because I needed to complete many assignments and read a lot of books.

The sentence mixes past tense 'went' with present tense 'need'. To maintain tense consistency, 'need' should be changed to past tense 'needed'. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' to match 'a lot of'.

× Yes, I often went to the library when I was at university because I need to complete many assignments and read a lot of book.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was at university because I needed to complete many assignments and read a lot of books.

The phrase 'a lot of book' is incorrect because 'book' should be plural 'books' when referring to many items.

× The library was my first choice because it was quiet and had a good environment for studying.

✓ The library was my first choice because it was quiet and had a good environment for studying.

This sentence is correct; no adjective or adverb misuse detected.

× Also, it had many useful results that helped me understand myself.

✓ Also, it had many useful resources that helped me understand myself.

The word 'results' is incorrect in this context; 'resources' is the appropriate word to describe helpful materials in a library.

× I often go to library for do my assignment and reading book because in the library there are so many, a lot of books that I can read and uh, I can uh, do a restart for what I didn't know.

✓ I often go to the library to do my assignments and read books because in the library there are many books that I can read and I can review what I didn't know.

The phrase 'go to library for do' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library to do'. 'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context. 'Reading book' should be 'read books'. 'Do a restart' is incorrect; 'review' or 'go over' is appropriate.

× I often go to library for do my assignment and reading book because in the library there are so many, a lot of books that I can read and uh, I can uh, do a restart for what I didn't know.

✓ I often go to the library to do my assignments and read books because in the library there are many books that I can read and I can review what I didn't know.

'Assignment' and 'book' should be plural 'assignments' and 'books' to correctly refer to multiple items.

× I often go to library for do my assignment and reading book because in the library there are so many, a lot of books that I can read and uh, I can uh, do a restart for what I didn't know.

✓ I often go to the library to do my assignments and read books because in the library there are many books that I can read and I can review what I didn't know.

The preposition 'for' before 'do' is incorrect; it should be 'to' to indicate purpose.

× Umm, when I was young I really go to umm library because my home is far away from library and also in my school a library in my school there no many outspoke that I can read, so I just uh read book from my home.

✓ Umm, when I was young I really went to the library because my home was far away from the library and also in my school there was not many books that I could read, so I just read books from my home.

The verb 'go' should be past tense 'went' to match 'when I was young'. 'Is' should be past tense 'was' to maintain tense consistency. 'No many outspoke' is incorrect; it should be 'not many books'. 'Read book' should be plural 'read books'.

× Umm, when I was young I really go to umm library because my home is far away from library and also in my school a library in my school there no many outspoke that I can read, so I just uh read book from my home.

✓ Umm, when I was young I really went to the library because my home was far away from the library and also in my school there was not many books that I could read, so I just read books from my home.

'Book' should be plural 'books' to refer to multiple items.

× Umm, when I was young I really go to umm library because my home is far away from library and also in my school a library in my school there no many outspoke that I can read, so I just uh read book from my home.

✓ Umm, when I was young I really went to the library because my home was far away from the library and also in my school there was not many books that I could read, so I just read books from my home.

The phrase 'far away from library' should be 'far away from the library' to include the definite article.

× For what I think umm, mostly our Chinese kids, they often go to library because umm school line in Chinese are so busy and uh need to do more research.

✓ From what I think, mostly our Chinese kids often go to the library because schools in China are so busy and need to do more research.

'School line in Chinese' is incorrect; it should be 'schools in China'. 'Library' should have the definite article 'the library'. 'School' should be plural 'schools' to match 'are'.

× For what I think umm, mostly our Chinese kids, they often go to library because umm school line in Chinese are so busy and uh need to do more research.

✓ From what I think, mostly our Chinese kids often go to the library because schools in China are so busy and need to do more research.

The phrase 'go to library' should be 'go to the library' to include the definite article.

× For what I think umm, mostly our Chinese kids, they often go to library because umm school line in Chinese are so busy and uh need to do more research.

✓ From what I think, mostly our Chinese kids often go to the library because schools in China are so busy and need to do more research.

'School line in Chinese' is incorrect; it should be 'schools in China' to correctly refer to multiple schools.

× So I think umm, Chinese kids are more mostly go to library.

✓ So I think, umm, Chinese kids mostly go to the library.

The phrase 'are more mostly go' is incorrect; it should be 'mostly go'. Also, 'library' should have the definite article 'the library'.