Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often go to the university library because it has a quiet self-study area where I can concentrate on preparing for exams and completing my assignments.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid unnecessary filler words.

예시: Usually, I do my assignments or study for the IELTS exam in the library because it offers a spacious self-study area. Additionally, I often read books there to improve my knowledge.

제안: Your answer has pronunciation issues and some hesitation. Try to speak more confidently and clearly. Also, provide a complete sentence with a clear reason and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library often when I was a kid because studying there was not my habit, and I didn't enjoy reading books at that time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer logically, use correct grammar, and avoid mixing ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your thoughts.

예시: I'm not sure about Chinese children, but in Japan, many kids often go to the library to borrow books for their assignments.

× In my university library there there is a self studying place and I can I go there to concentrate, concentrate on my preparation for I use or doing my assignments.

✓ In my university library, there is a self-study place where I can go to concentrate on my preparation or doing my assignments.

The sentence had a repeated word 'there' and awkward phrasing. 'Self studying place' should be 'self-study place' as a compound adjective. Also, 'I can I go there' is redundant; it should be 'I can go there'. The phrase 'preparation for I use or doing my assignments' is unclear and corrected to 'preparation or doing my assignments' for clarity.

× Usually I do my assignments or study for IELTS because my as I said my university has a very wide space of self studying films and also I use their to read books.

✓ Usually, I do my assignments or study for IELTS because, as I said, my university has a very wide space for self-study and I also use it to read books.

The phrase 'space of self studying films' is incorrect; it should be 'space for self-study'. 'Use their' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'use it' referring to the space. Added commas for clarity.

× I didn't Cordia because studying at library was not my habit and also uh, I didn't like reading books when I was a kid.

✓ I didn't go to the library because studying at the library was not my habit and also, I didn't like reading books when I was a kid.

'Didn't Cordia' is incorrect; likely intended 'didn't go to the library'. Added 'the' before 'library' as it is a specific place. Removed filler 'uh' for clarity.

× I'm not sure what time in China because I'm from Japan, but in Japan kids, I think a lot of kids are going to library so that they to borrow up books for the assignment.

✓ I'm not sure about the situation in China because I'm from Japan, but in Japan, I think a lot of kids go to the library to borrow books for their assignments.

'Not sure what time in China' is incorrect; corrected to 'not sure about the situation in China'. 'Going to library' needs the definite article 'the library'. 'They to borrow up books' is incorrect; corrected to 'to borrow books'. Added 'their' before 'assignments' for possessive clarity.