Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and contains some redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and natural by directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet and focused environment for studying. For example, I find it easier to concentrate there than at home, where there are many distractions.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and repetitive phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily and improve sentence flow.

예시: Usually, I study and complete my homework in the library because I have a lot of assignments as a senior high school student. Besides that, I also enjoy reading books there to expand my knowledge.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure to make your response more coherent.

예시: I didn't often go to the library when I was a child. However, a few years ago, I started visiting libraries to borrow interesting books, such as business books, which I enjoy reading.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words. Try to use more precise vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, complete your sentences fully and avoid trailing off at the end.

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids, especially teenagers, often go to the library to study and learn. For instance, students in my community frequently visit the library to read books and complete their homework, which I think is a positive habit.

× Well, most of the time I go to library to study instead of just staying at home doing nothing because I felt that, uh, there's a very, uh, superior environment and atmospheres for me to learning if I stay as a library rather than just stay at home, uh, which I can do nothing.

✓ Well, most of the time I go to the library to study instead of just staying at home doing nothing because I feel that there's a very superior environment and atmosphere for me to learn if I stay at the library rather than just stay at home, where I can do nothing.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'atmospheres' should be singular 'atmosphere' to match the context, and 'to learning' should be 'to learn' because 'to' is a preposition here, not part of an infinitive verb. Additionally, 'felt' should be 'feel' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Well, most of the time I go to library to study instead of just staying at home doing nothing because I felt that, uh, there's a very, uh, superior environment and atmospheres for me to learning if I stay as a library rather than just stay at home, uh, which I can do nothing.

✓ Well, most of the time I go to the library to study instead of just staying at home doing nothing because I feel that there's a very superior environment and atmosphere for me to learn if I stay at the library rather than just stay at home, where I can do nothing.

The word 'atmospheres' is plural but the context suggests a singular environment, so it should be 'atmosphere' to agree in number with 'environment'.

× Well, most of the time I go to library to study instead of just staying at home doing nothing because I felt that, uh, there's a very, uh, superior environment and atmospheres for me to learning if I stay as a library rather than just stay at home, uh, which I can do nothing.

✓ Well, most of the time I go to the library to study instead of just staying at home doing nothing because I feel that there's a very superior environment and atmosphere for me to learn if I stay at the library rather than just stay at home, where I can do nothing.

The verb 'felt' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so it should be in the present tense 'feel' to maintain consistency.

× To be honest, I often study in library. For example, I do in my homework. That is the most common thing that I do in library.

✓ To be honest, I often study in the library. For example, I do my homework. That is the most common thing that I do in the library.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'do in my homework' is incorrect; it should be 'do my homework' without 'in'.

× For example, I do in my homework.

✓ For example, I do my homework.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The correct phrase is 'do my homework'.

× The reason is just because I am a Senior High School student so I have pretty much of homework that I need to finish like in the library.

✓ The reason is just because I am a Senior High School student, so I have pretty much homework that I need to finish, like in the library.

The phrase 'pretty much of homework' is incorrect; 'pretty much homework' is correct without 'of'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate clauses.

× Apart from that I will I will read the books.

✓ Apart from that, I will read books.

The definite article 'the' before 'books' is unnecessary unless referring to specific books. Also, the repeated 'I will' is redundant and should be corrected.

× Quality product is this is a tough question because I couldn't have that, that went to library, uh, when I was young, but, uh, a few years before I went to, uh, libraries just because I want to borrow a book, which is, uh, nice because that is a business book and it's very interesting and I wanted to go for.

✓ This is a tough question because I didn't go to the library when I was young, but a few years ago I went to libraries just because I wanted to borrow a book, which was nice because it was a business book and very interesting, and I wanted to read it.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'couldn't have that, that went to library' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't go to the library'. 'A few years before' should be 'a few years ago'. 'I want' should be 'I wanted' to maintain past tense. Also, 'go for' is unclear and should be 'read it'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'.

× No question, most of the Chinese, especially the teenagers, they like to go library for studying and learning the things.

✓ No question, most Chinese, especially teenagers, like to go to the library for studying and learning things.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. Also, 'go library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'. The phrase 'the Chinese' is better as 'most Chinese' unless referring to a specific group. 'The things' should be 'things' without 'the'.

× No question, most of the Chinese, especially the teenagers, they like to go library for studying and learning the things.

✓ No question, most Chinese, especially teenagers, like to go to the library for studying and learning things.

The preposition 'to' is missing after 'go'. The phrase should be 'go to the library'. Also, 'the things' is incorrect; it should be just 'things'.

× For example, uh, some local students in our community, they go to, uh, library for, uh, reading the books and also, uh, doing the homework.

✓ For example, some local students in our community go to the library for reading books and also doing homework.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. Also, 'the books' and 'the homework' are incorrect unless referring to specific items; they should be 'books' and 'homework'.