Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and a bit lengthy. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add specific reasons. Also, avoid redundant phrases like 'part and parcel of our life' and focus on clear, natural expressions.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me improve my knowledge and spend my free time productively.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Be specific about what you read and why it benefits you.

예시: I usually read books and articles in the library because they help me gain new knowledge and improve my reading skills.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Use past tense correctly and explain your reasons clearly. Avoid vague phrases and try to connect your ideas logically with linking words.

예시: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because my studies were simpler then. However, now I visit the library often to help me with more difficult subjects.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific examples or reasons to support your answer.

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it helps them gain information and improve their problem-solving skills.

× Library plays a paramount role in everyone's life.

✓ The library plays a paramount role in everyone's life.

In English, when referring to a specific place or concept like 'library' in a general sense, the definite article 'the' is used to specify it. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect here.

× Yes, of course, I prefer to go to library on my daily basis just to enhance my knowledge as well as to spend my leisure time in a good way.

✓ Yes, of course, I prefer to go to the library on a daily basis just to enhance my knowledge as well as to spend my leisure time in a good way.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, the phrase 'on my daily basis' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on a daily basis'.

× Yes, of course, I prefer to go to library on my daily basis just to enhance my knowledge as well as to spend my leisure time in a good way.

✓ Yes, of course, I prefer to go to the library on a daily basis just to enhance my knowledge as well as to spend my leisure time in a good way.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'a daily basis', but the phrase should be 'on a daily basis' not 'on my daily basis'. The possessive 'my' is incorrect here.

× In the library, I usually prefer to do reading because I my thinking I feel that it is very beneficial as well as essential to know reading that how to read the books as well as it is very beneficial to enhance our knowledge.

✓ In the library, I usually prefer to do reading because I think it is very beneficial as well as essential to know how to read books, and it is very beneficial to enhance our knowledge.

The phrase 'I my thinking I feel' is incorrect and redundant; it should be simplified to 'I think'. Also, 'to know reading that how to read the books' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to know how to read books'. The article 'the' before 'books' is unnecessary here.

× No, not at all. When I was kid, I don't prefer to go to library because on that time my study was not that much stuff that that it was in nowadays.

✓ No, not at all. When I was a kid, I didn't prefer to go to the library because at that time my studies were not as much as they are nowadays.

The phrase 'When I was kid' is missing the article 'a'. The verb 'don't prefer' should be in past tense 'didn't prefer' to match the past context. 'On that time' should be 'at that time'. 'My study was not that much stuff' is incorrect; it should be 'my studies were not as much'.

× No, not at all. When I was kid, I don't prefer to go to library because on that time my study was not that much stuff that that it was in nowadays.

✓ No, not at all. When I was a kid, I didn't prefer to go to the library because at that time my studies were not as much as they are nowadays.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic work in general.

× I faced a lot of problems in this technical era to solve my problems related to study.

✓ I face a lot of problems in this technical era to solve my problems related to study.

The sentence is about a current ongoing situation, so present tense 'face' is more appropriate than past tense 'faced'. However, if the speaker refers to past experiences, past tense is correct. Context suggests ongoing issues, so present tense is better.

× So that's why I usually prefer to go to library just to expand.

✓ So that's why I usually prefer to go to the library just to expand my knowledge.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'just to expand' should specify what is being expanded, e.g., 'my knowledge'.

× According to my knowledge, yes. Of course. Chinese usually go to library, especially kids, just to increase their ability to gain more and more information, as well as to expand their ability to understand the things and to solve the problematic things.

✓ According to my knowledge, yes. Of course. Chinese usually go to the library, especially kids, just to increase their ability to gain more and more information, as well as to expand their ability to understand things and to solve problems.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. Also, 'the things' and 'the problematic things' are incorrect; 'things' and 'problems' without 'the' are more natural here.

× So that's why they usually prefer to go to library.

✓ So that's why they usually prefer to go to the library.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place.