Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'I really appreciate that have such,' say 'I really appreciate having such a facility.'

예시: I didn't often go to the library in my hometown because there wasn't one available. However, now that I'm at university, I frequently use the large, well-equipped library, which I really appreciate because it helps me study effectively.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using more precise vocabulary. Also, ensure linking words are used correctly to enhance coherence. For example, instead of ending with 'Collaborative,' integrate it into the sentence.

예시: I usually study and complete my assignments in the library because it offers a quiet and comfortable environment. Moreover, it has six seminar rooms where I can hold group discussions with classmates, which greatly supports collaborative learning.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and hesitations. Try to speak more fluently and clearly. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about your feelings.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there wasn't one in my hometown. However, I feel a bit disappointed about this because libraries can inspire new ideas and be very helpful for learning.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'go to pay' and explain your points with specific reasons.

예시: I don't think many Chinese children often go to the library. Many families prefer their children to attend extra classes or tutoring sessions because they believe this gives them a better chance to succeed academically.

× In the past I rarely have the chance to go to a library because there is no one in my hometown for residents to read.

✓ In the past I rarely had the chance to go to a library because there was no one in my hometown for residents to read.

The sentence refers to a past situation, so the verb tense should be in the past tense ('had' instead of 'have') to maintain consistency and accuracy.

× In the past I rarely have the chance to go to a library because there is no one in my hometown for residents to read.

✓ In the past I rarely had the chance to go to the library because there was no one in my hometown for residents to read.

When referring to a specific library known to the speaker and listener, the definite article 'the' should be used instead of 'a'.

× But now I'm in university so there is a large and well equipped library for us to study and I really appreciate that have such.

✓ But now I'm at university, so there is a large and well-equipped library for us to study, and I really appreciate having such a facility.

The sentence has structural issues and missing words. 'At university' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Well-equipped' needs a hyphen. The phrase 'I really appreciate that have such' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'I really appreciate having such a facility' for clarity and correctness.

× I should study and do my assignments in the library because it provides a quiet and comfortable environment for us to concentrate.

✓ I usually study and do my assignments in the library because it provides a quiet and comfortable environment for us to concentrate.

'Should' implies obligation or advice, which is not appropriate here. 'Usually' better expresses habitual action.

× No, I didn't go to library when I was a child because there was no one in my hometown for residents to read.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because there was no one in my hometown for residents to read.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place.

× But I think I I, I feel a bit disappointed about library because I think library can bring new ideas and helpful to us.

✓ But I think I feel a bit disappointed about the library because I think the library can bring new ideas and be helpful to us.

The sentence has repetition ('I I, I') and missing articles before 'library'. Also, 'helpful to us' needs the verb 'be' to be grammatically correct.

× No, I don't think so. In many families they would like their children to go to pay or have classes instead of go to the library because maybe they think it is important to give their chance to study.

✓ No, I don't think so. In many families, they would like their children to go to tuition or have classes instead of going to the library because maybe they think it is important to give them a chance to study.

'Go to pay' is incorrect; 'go to tuition' or 'have classes' is better. 'Instead of go' should be 'instead of going' to maintain correct verb form after 'instead of'. 'Give their chance' should be 'give them a chance' to use the correct pronoun and article.