Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains some unclear phrases. Try to give a clear and concise response with correct grammar and avoid repeating words. For example, start with a direct answer and then add a reason.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books and find it a quiet place to focus.

제안: Your answer has some hesitation and lacks smooth linking. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, be more specific about what you do.

예시: In the library, I usually read books and look up the meanings of difficult words because I want to improve my vocabulary and gain knowledge.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and hesitation. Try to speak more fluently and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the school library where I enjoyed reading books and sometimes playing educational games with my friends.

제안: Your answer has many hesitations and some grammar mistakes. Try to use complete sentences and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they want to gain knowledge and enjoy the peaceful environment it offers.

× Yes, Ioffer. Yes, I often go to the library because I I fond of I fond of reading books.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because I am fond of reading books.

The original sentence has repeated words and lacks a verb 'am' to link the subject 'I' with the adjective 'fond'. The phrase 'I I fond of I fond of' is incorrect and confusing. The corrected sentence uses proper sentence structure with the verb 'am' to express the state of being fond of reading books.

× I usually do in library is reading books uh and uh, searching uh, meaning of uh, difficult words, uh and uh. I usually go library for gaining knowledge.

✓ What I usually do in the library is read books and search for the meanings of difficult words. I usually go to the library to gain knowledge.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and missing prepositions. 'I usually do in library is reading books' is incorrect; it should be 'What I usually do in the library is read books'. Also, 'searching uh, meaning of uh, difficult words' should be 'search for the meanings of difficult words'. The phrase 'go library for gaining knowledge' lacks the preposition 'to' and should be 'go to the library to gain knowledge'.

× I remember when I was a kid, uh, we used to go school library there, there we were, there we, we were reading books and, uh, playing games.

✓ I remember when I was a kid, we used to go to the school library. There, we were reading books and playing games.

The original sentence misses the preposition 'to' before 'school library' and the article 'the' before 'school library'. Also, the sentence is repetitive and disorganized. The corrected sentence adds 'to the school library' and removes unnecessary repetitions for clarity.

× Yes, uh, Chinese, Chinese kids, uh, often go to library. Uh, all kids are going to library because uh, all kids want to gaining their knowledge, they want peace. Library give peace.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. All kids go to the library because they want to gain knowledge and find peace. The library gives peace.

The original sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'want to gaining' is incorrect; it should be 'want to gain'. The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'library'. The corrected sentence fixes these errors and improves clarity.