Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like "helps to keep me considered on my study"; instead, say "helps me focus on my studies." Also, use linking words like "because" and "also" to improve coherence. Try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences for clarity.

예시: I often visit the library because the quiet environment helps me focus on my studies. I also read books there and work on school projects, which improve my knowledge in specific subjects.

제안: Your answer covers the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly (e.g., "different types of activities") and clarify your points. Use linking words like "for example" or "also" to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I do different types of activities in the library. For example, I use the computers to complete my school projects on digital technology. I also read books about agriculture and economics, which help me learn more about these subjects.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct articles and prepositions (e.g., "when I was a kid," "in fifth grade"). Also, clarify what you mean by "improve things." Try to make your sentences more natural and concise.

예시: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. I remember when I was in fifth grade, my father took me there and gave me a comic book to read. It was an enjoyable book with pictures that helped me learn new things.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has awkward phrasing and grammar issues. Use "Chinese kids" instead of "Chinese learners" for clarity. Also, avoid vague phrases like "expandable experience." Use linking words like "also" and improve sentence structure for natural flow.

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library. They use the computers to complete their projects and also read books, which helps them gain useful knowledge and life experience.

× I frequently visit the library these days.

✓ I have been frequently visiting the library these days.

The phrase 'these days' suggests a current ongoing action, so the present perfect continuous tense is more appropriate than simple present tense to express this ongoing habit.

× First of all is that it helps to keep me considered on my study because of the quiet environment.

✓ First of all, it helps me to stay focused on my studies because of the quiet environment.

The phrase 'keep me considered on my study' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'helps me to stay focused on my studies'. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' when referring to academic work in general.

× sometimes I read the books over there and complete school completion projects which are useful for me to improve my knowledge in specific areas.

✓ sometimes I read books there and complete school projects which are useful for improving my knowledge in specific areas.

The phrase 'the books over there' is awkward; 'books there' is more natural. 'School completion projects' is unclear; 'school projects' is better. Also, 'useful for me to improve' should be 'useful for improving' to correctly use the gerund after 'useful for'.

× I do different type of activities in the library.

✓ I do different types of activities in the library.

The phrase 'different type' should be plural 'different types' because 'different' implies more than one type.

× Sometimes I go to library to complete my school projects on the digital technology such as on the computers.

✓ Sometimes I go to the library to complete my school projects on digital technology, such as using the computers.

The phrase 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'On the digital technology' is awkward; 'on digital technology' is better. 'Such as on the computers' is incorrect; 'such as using the computers' is clearer.

× I read different type of books such as agriculture, economic comics which improve my knowledge in these areas.

✓ I read different types of books such as agriculture and economic comics which improve my knowledge in these areas.

Again, 'different type' should be plural 'different types'. Also, a conjunction 'and' is needed between 'agriculture' and 'economic comics'.

× Yes, I went to the library when I was kid.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'.

× I still remember a time I was in a fifth standard.

✓ I still remember a time when I was in fifth grade.

The phrase 'a fifth standard' is incorrect; the correct term in English is 'fifth grade'. Also, 'a time I was' should be 'a time when I was' for clarity.

× When I went to the library with my father, he gave me a book of comics to read.

✓ When I went to the library with my father, he gave me a comic book to read.

The phrase 'a book of comics' is awkward; the correct term is 'a comic book'.

× It was very good book with the picture description and enjoyable to get some knowledge, improve things.

✓ It was a very good book with pictures and enjoyable to gain some knowledge and improve things.

The phrase 'very good book' needs the article 'a'. 'With the picture description' is awkward; 'with pictures' is better. 'Enjoyable to get some knowledge, improve things' should be 'enjoyable to gain some knowledge and improve things' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, these days Chinese learners are going to the library.

✓ Yes, these days Chinese learners often go to the library.

The phrase 'are going to the library' suggests a current action, but 'these days' implies a habitual action, so simple present tense 'often go' is more appropriate.

× First of all, they go to the library to complete their projects on the computers.

✓ First of all, they go to the library to complete their projects using the computers.

The phrase 'projects on the computers' is awkward; 'projects using the computers' is clearer.

× sometimes they go library to read books which are very useful and expandable experience for them to gain experience in life.

✓ Sometimes they go to the library to read books which provide a very useful and enriching experience for them to gain knowledge in life.

The phrase 'go library' needs the article 'to the library'. 'Expandable experience' is incorrect; 'enriching experience' or 'valuable experience' is better. Also, 'gain experience in life' is better expressed as 'gain knowledge in life' for clarity.