Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical slips and add a bit more detail to enrich your response.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library now because I have access to a digital library. However, I used to visit the library frequently when I was a student, as the Internet was not widely available then, so it was the best place to find study materials.

제안: Your answer is good and relevant, but you can improve by adding linking words and more specific details to make your response more natural and effective.

예시: Usually, I read books in the library because the quiet environment helps me concentrate. Moreover, being surrounded by others who are studying motivates me to focus more and stay disciplined.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, you could add linking words and more specific details or examples to enrich your response and make it more engaging.

예시: Yes, I went to the library a lot as a child. For example, I could borrow books for a limited period, usually around 10 to 20 days, which encouraged me to read regularly and return them on time.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting minor grammar errors and adding linking words and more specific details to make your response more natural and coherent.

예시: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but in the place where I live, most children don't visit the library often. Instead, they prefer to use the Internet and digital libraries for their studies because these resources are more convenient and accessible.

× No, I don't often go to the library now because I have access to digital library.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library now because I have access to the digital library.

The phrase 'digital library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific resource that the speaker has access to. Omitting 'the' makes the sentence sound incomplete or incorrect.

× Also being surrounded by other who are studying motivates me to focus more.

✓ Also being surrounded by others who are studying motivates me to focus more.

The word 'other' should be pluralized to 'others' when referring to people in general. 'Others' is the correct pronoun to indicate additional people.

× I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but in the place where I live, most children don't visit library often.

✓ I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but in the place where I live, most children don't visit the library often.

The noun 'library' here requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific library or libraries in the speaker's area. Omitting 'the' is grammatically incorrect in this context.

× Instead they prefer use the Internet and digital library for their studies.

✓ Instead they prefer to use the Internet and the digital library for their studies.

After the verb 'prefer', the correct form is 'to use' (infinitive), not just 'use'. Also, 'the' should be added before 'digital library' for specificity.