Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте лишних пауз и слов-паразитов, таких как "umm" и "uh". Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте конкретные причины, используя связующие слова для логичности.

예시: No, I rarely go to the library because nowadays most people prefer using online books. For me, it's more interesting and comfortable to read on the internet.

제안: Ответ не ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует прямо ответить на вопрос, использовать связующие слова и конкретизировать детали, например, почему нравится читать романы из Англии.

예시: Usually, I read English romance novels in the library because I enjoy their simple and engaging stories.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре. Начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину, используя правильные времена и связующие слова.

예시: Actually, no, I never went to the library as a child because my mother never encouraged me to go; instead, she bought books for me.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит много слов-паразитов. Следует ответить прямо, использовать связующие слова и объяснить мнение более чётко и грамотно.

예시: I think Chinese kids sometimes go to the library when they want. However, some parents may not always allow them to go.

× it seems to me that library, it's not actual umm, I think in nowadays because many people, uh, use umm, Internet books, umm, for me it's more interesting and, uh, comfortable.

✓ it seems to me that the library is not actually used nowadays because many people use Internet books; for me, it's more interesting and comfortable.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'actual' should be 'actually' as an adverb modifying the verb. 'Nowadays' is used without 'in'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× it seems to me that library, it's not actual umm, I think in nowadays because many people, uh, use umm, Internet books, umm, for me it's more interesting and, uh, comfortable.

✓ it seems to me that the library is not actually used nowadays because many people use Internet books; for me, it's more interesting and comfortable.

The verb 'is' is needed to correctly express the present tense state of the library. 'It's not actual' is incorrect; 'is not actually used' is correct.

× Internet books

✓ Internet books

'Internet books' is acceptable if referring to multiple books online; no correction needed here.

× I think it's usual question in the library.

✓ I think it's a usual question in the library.

The sentence lacks the indefinite article 'a' before 'usual question'. This article is necessary for singular countable nouns.

× I read a book I like Romance from England.

✓ I read a book I like, a romance from England.

'Romance' should be lowercase as it is a genre, and the sentence needs commas to clarify meaning. Also, 'a romance' is more natural.

× I don't know why, but it's quite a similar simply.

✓ I don't know why, but it's quite simple and similar.

The phrase 'a similar simply' is incorrect. 'Simple' is an adjective, and 'simply' is an adverb; the sentence needs to use adjectives properly and connect them with 'and'.

× Actually, no, I never go to the library when I were a kid because, umm, in my childhood, my mother's, umm, don't give me advice about the library and say she just, uh, bought me the book.

✓ Actually, no, I never went to the library when I was a kid because, in my childhood, my mother didn't give me advice about the library and said she just bought me books.

The past tense 'went' and 'was' are required for past events. 'Mother's' should be 'my mother' as the subject. 'Don't' should be 'didn't' for past negative. 'Say' should be 'said' for past tense. 'The book' changed to 'books' for general meaning.

× my mother's, umm, don't give me advice about the library and say she just, uh, bought me the book.

✓ my mother didn't give me advice about the library and said she just bought me books.

'Mother's' is possessive and incorrect here; the subject pronoun 'my mother' is needed. Verb agreement with subject is corrected.

× I never go to the library when I were a kid

✓ I never went to the library when I was a kid

The past tense 'went' and 'was' are required to describe past events; 'go' and 'were' are incorrect here.

× I think it's a little bit, uh, strange question, but OK.

✓ I think it's a little bit of a strange question, but OK.

The phrase 'a little bit of a' is the correct idiomatic expression before a noun phrase like 'strange question'.

× Chinese kids sometimes go to the library when uh, they want and I believe that say your parents, umm, didn't just allowed.

✓ Chinese kids sometimes go to the library when they want, and I believe that their parents don't just allow it.

The verb 'allow' should be in present tense 'allow' to match 'sometimes go'. 'Didn't just allowed' is incorrect; 'don't just allow' is correct. 'Say your parents' is unclear and corrected to 'their parents'.