Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar, such as using correct tenses and prepositions. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying in my own room. I find it more comfortable and convenient than going to a library.

제안: Your answer has many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently and use correct verb forms. Also, organize your answer logically with linking words to make it coherent.

예시: In the library, I usually study quietly. Sometimes, I take breaks to eat a snack. If I'm lucky, I might meet some friends there, which makes the study session more enjoyable.

제안: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and correct grammar. Avoid filler words and use past tense properly. Also, provide a direct answer followed by supporting details.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I didn't study hard. Studying at home was enough for me at that time.

제안: Your answer is vague and repetitive. Try to give a clear and concise response, avoiding unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but I know that Iranian kids usually study at school rather than in libraries or cafes.

× No, unfortunately I don't have much time to go at these places.

✓ No, unfortunately I don't have much time to go to these places.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'go'. The correct preposition is 'to' when indicating movement towards a place.

× I prefer to study in my own room, so I didn't.

✓ I prefer to study in my own room, so I don't.

The sentence mixes present tense 'prefer' with past tense 'didn't'. Since the preference is current, the negative should be in present tense 'don't'.

× In my opinion, house is better than library.

✓ In my opinion, the house is better than the library.

When referring to specific places like 'house' and 'library' in a general sense, the definite article 'the' is required.

× Uh, I usually studying in library, uh, besides studying, but I, uh, need some food.

✓ Uh, I usually study in the library, uh, besides studying, but I, uh, need some food.

After 'usually', the base form of the verb 'study' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'studying'. Also, 'in library' needs the article 'the'.

× Uh, I usually studying in library, uh, besides studying, but I, uh, need some food.

✓ Uh, I usually study in the library, uh, besides studying, but I, uh, need some food.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× Uh, I, uh, leave my lessons and just go and eat something.

✓ Uh, I, uh, leave my lessons and just go to eat something.

The phrase 'go and eat' is informal and less appropriate here; 'go to eat' is clearer. Also, 'leave my lessons' is awkward; 'take a break from my lessons' would be better, but this is beyond the scope.

× And maybe, uh, if I were lucky at that day, I would see my friends at the library.

✓ And maybe, uh, if I were lucky that day, I would see my friends at the library.

The phrase 'at that day' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'that day' without 'at'.

× So I will meet.

✓ So I will meet them.

The verb 'meet' requires an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'them' clarifies who will be met.

× No, when I was a kid, uh, I didn't used to study hard so I couldn't go to library.

✓ No, when I was a kid, uh, I didn't use to study hard so I couldn't go to the library.

The phrase 'didn't use to' is correct for negative past habitual actions. Also, 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Uh, studying in uh in house was enough to my lessons so I didn't go to anywhere, just sending in my own home.

✓ Uh, studying at home was enough for my lessons so I didn't go anywhere, just staying in my own home.

'Studying in house' is incorrect; 'studying at home' is the correct expression. 'Enough to my lessons' should be 'enough for my lessons'. 'Go to anywhere' is incorrect; 'go anywhere' is correct. 'Sending' should be 'staying'.

× I don't know. I just know about Iranian kids.

✓ I don't know. I only know about Iranian kids.

The phrase 'just know about' is acceptable but 'only know about' is clearer and more natural in this context.

× But uh, as I know, I think I often study at schools, not at the library or even at the cafe.

✓ But uh, as far as I know, I think I often study at school, not at the library or even at the cafe.

The phrase 'as I know' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'as far as I know'. Also, 'at schools' is better as 'at school' when referring to the general concept of attending school.