Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接表达去图书馆的原因，并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I need a quiet place to study.

제안: 回答内容不够连贯，语法错误明显，表达不准确。建议直接回答主要活动，并用连接词丰富细节。

예시: Usually, I don't read books in the library. Instead, I do my homework and review the PowerPoint slides that my teacher has taught.

제안: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清楚。建议用简单句子清晰描述过去去图书馆的经历和原因。

예시: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because I liked to read books. After reading, I sometimes bought the books I liked.

제안: 回答中语法和表达错误较多，句子不连贯。建议用更准确的句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: No, I don't think many Chinese kids often go to the library. When I was a kid, my friends usually invited me to play sports like swimming or basketball, but rarely to the library.

× I just want to found a quiet place to study.

✓ I just want to find a quiet place to study.

这里的动词应使用原形find，而不是过去式found，因为动词want后面接动词不定式。

× Usually I don't read a library, I just do my homework, read the PPT which teacher have teached.

✓ Usually I don't read in the library, I just do my homework and read the PPT which the teacher has taught.

动词read后面需要介词in来表示地点；teacher前应加定冠词the；动词have teached错误，正确为has taught，teached不是teach的过去分词。

× Yes I did apparently went to library when I was a kid because at that time my purpose was really add books of time.

✓ Yes, I did. Apparently, I went to the library when I was a kid because at that time my purpose was really to add books over time.

did后面不接过去式went，应直接用went表示过去时；缺少冠词the；表达目的时应使用不定式to add；表达时间段应使用over time。

× I will buy the book after I read what I.

✓ I will buy the book after I read it.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语it，导致句意不明。

× When I was a kid, there are no friends invited me to go to library most of our time.

✓ When I was a kid, there were no friends who invited me to go to the library most of the time.

过去时态应使用were而非are；缺少关系代词who引导定语从句；缺少定冠词the；时间表达应为most of the time。

× They were invited me to swimming, to running, to basket, play basketball, but just not library.

✓ They invited me to swim, to run, to play basketball, but not to the library.

动词invite后接动词应使用动词原形swim、run、play；basket应改为play basketball；缺少介词to；缺少定冠词the。