Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤り（"which located"は"which is located"が正しい）や不自然な表現（"by studying"は不適切）があります。また、内容がやや冗長で、より自然で簡潔な表現が望ましいです。

예시: Yes, I often go to the library at my university in Kyoto. I visit not only to read books but also to study because it's a quiet place where I can concentrate well.

제안: 文法ミス（"concentrate my studying"は"concentrate on my studies"、"I can studying"は"I can study"、"without disturbed"は"without being disturbed"が正しい）があります。内容は直接的ですが、より自然で流暢な表現を心がけましょう。

예시: I usually study in the library because the quiet environment helps me concentrate on my studies. I can study there without being disturbed by others.

제안: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります（"when I was in child"は"when I was a child"、"I would like, rather than playing outside with my friends, likes doing sports"は不自然）。より明確で正確な表現を使いましょう。

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child. I didn't read much because I preferred playing sports outside with my friends.

제안: 文法の誤り（"I'm not sure what Chinese kids"は"I'm not sure about Chinese kids"、"may they may"は繰り返しで不自然）や不明瞭な表現があります。より明確で自然な回答を心がけ、理由を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many of them go to the library. I believe they are very studious, so they probably use the library to study or do research.

× I usually go to the library in my university which located in Kyoto.

✓ I usually go to the library in my university which is located in Kyoto.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' in the relative clause 'which is located in Kyoto'. In English, 'there be' issues include missing forms of 'to be' verbs. Adding 'is' correctly links the clause to the noun 'university'.

× I went there not only to read books but also by studying because I can concentrate.

✓ I went there not only to read books but also to study because I can concentrate.

The phrase 'but also by studying' is incorrect. The correct parallel structure after 'not only' is 'to read' and after 'but also' should be 'to study'. Using 'by studying' breaks the parallelism and is grammatically incorrect.

× The quiet environment helps me concentrate my studying.

✓ The quiet environment helps me concentrate on my studying.

The verb 'concentrate' is usually followed by the preposition 'on' when indicating the object of concentration. Omitting 'on' is a prepositional error.

× I can studying without disturbed by other people.

✓ I can study without being disturbed by other people.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'studying' is incorrect. Also, 'without disturbed' is incorrect; it should be 'without being disturbed' to form the correct passive gerund phrase.

× I didn't read very much when I was in child.

✓ I didn't read very much when I was a child.

The phrase 'in child' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a child' to indicate the time when the person was young. This is a fixed expression rather than a tense issue, but it relates to correct past time expression.

× I would like, rather than playing outside with my friends, likes doing sports.

✓ I would rather do sports than play outside with my friends.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. The correct structure for expressing preference is 'would rather do X than do Y'. Also, 'likes' is incorrect here; the verb should be in base form after 'would rather'.

× I'm not sure what Chinese kids, but maybe I think so.

✓ I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but maybe I think so.

The phrase 'I'm not sure what Chinese kids' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct expression is 'I'm not sure about Chinese kids' to indicate uncertainty regarding them.

× So they may they may go to the library to study or search.

✓ So they may go to the library to study or search.

The phrase 'may they may' is a repetition error. Only one 'may' is needed to express possibility.