Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. For example, "I don't go to library so often" should be "I don't go to the library very often." Also, "She likes to reading novels" should be "She likes reading novels." Try to use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid repeating similar ideas.

예시: I don't go to the library very often, but my wife visits the one near our home regularly because she enjoys reading novels and often borrows several books from there.

제안: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but you can improve coherence by using more linking words and avoid redundancy like "start by browsing" and "usually" together. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and be concise.

예시: I usually browse different books, like novels or history, to find something interesting. Then, I read them briefly. However, I prefer digital content because it provides quick and convenient access to up-to-date information, especially articles related to my studies.

제안: Your answer is good with clear structure and relevant details. However, watch for word choice errors like "populist" which should be "popular series" or "books." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often went to the library near my home, about a 10-minute walk away. I especially enjoyed reading popular children's books like Harry Potter because they sparked my imagination and made reading enjoyable. Moreover, the library was a quiet and comfortable place where I could explore many different books.

제안: Your answer provides relevant information but contains a mistake: "modernizing liability" should be "modernizing libraries." Also, avoid starting with uncertainty; try to give a confident opinion. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids often visit libraries because they have become more accessible and popular recently. For example, schools organize reading activities to encourage children to use local libraries and develop good reading habits. Additionally, the government has invested in modernizing libraries to support this trend.

× Actually, I don't go to library so often, but my wife often goes to the library near my home.

✓ Actually, I don't go to the library so often, but my wife often goes to the library near my home.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× She likes to reading novels, so she often go there and rent a few kinds of books there.

✓ She likes to read novels, so she often goes there and rents a few kinds of books there.

After 'likes to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'she often go' should be 'she often goes' to agree with the third person singular subject.

× She likes to reading novels, so she often go there and rent a few kinds of books there.

✓ She likes to read novels, so she often goes there and rents a few kinds of books there.

For third person singular subjects like 'she', verbs in the present tense require an 's' or 'es' ending. Therefore, 'go' should be 'goes' and 'rent' should be 'rents'.

× I often went to the library in my town, which is about a 10 minute walk from my home.

✓ I often went to the library in my town, which is about a 10-minute walk from my home.

When using a compound adjective like '10-minute' before a noun, it should be hyphenated to clarify that it modifies 'walk'.

× I really enjoyed reading children's novels, especially populist like Harry Potter, because they sparked my imagination and made reading fun.

✓ I really enjoyed reading children's novels, especially popular ones like Harry Potter, because they sparked my imagination and made reading fun.

The word 'populist' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'popular'. Also, 'popular ones' is needed to refer to the novels.

× Additionally, the government has invested in modernizing liability.

✓ Additionally, the government has invested in modernizing libraries.

The word 'liability' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'libraries', which fits the topic of the sentence.