Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the question directly, then provide one or two concise supporting details. Use correct tenses (past for childhood, present for now) and avoid repetition. Keep answers under five sentences and use linking words like "but" or "now" to contrast past and present.

예시: Not really. I used to go to the library regularly when I was a child, but now I rarely go because I have a heavier workload. When I did go, I spent hours studying and borrowing books.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., "I usually..."). Use gerunds correctly after verbs ("to do" not "to doing") and correct noun forms ("reading books"). Add one specific detail and a linking phrase to compare with home ("because" or "which is").

예시: I usually go to the library to do my assignments and read books. It is quieter than my home, so I can concentrate better and finish my work faster.

제안: Answer directly in the past simple for past habits ("I went" or "I used to go"). Avoid mixed tense and redundant phrases. Give one specific example of what you did there and keep it concise. Use linking words like "and" or "for example" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library very often when I was a child. I would use the computers or tablets there and borrow picture books and storybooks to read at home.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason or evidence. Use correct plural forms ("students") and more natural phrases ("from films and school culture"). Avoid relying only on movies as evidence—mention other sources like school expectations or personal observation.

예시: I think many Chinese students often go to the library because schools encourage studying there and exams are important. Also, films and my own observations show students using libraries for assignments and study groups.

× I often go there whenever it's a kid compared to what I am now because I have quite a lot of workload that didn't allow me to go there.

✓ I often went there when I was a kid compared to now because I have a heavy workload that does not allow me to go there.

Tense inconsistency and incorrect time expression: 'it's a kid' is incorrect for referring to past time; use 'when I was a kid'. The first clause should be past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also 'didn't allow me' should be present tense 'does not allow me' because the heavy workload is a present condition. Suggestion: decide whether you mean past or present and keep tenses consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× So when I was a kid, I go there often than I was today.

✓ So when I was a kid, I went there more often than I do now.

Incorrect tense and comparative structure: 'I go' should be past 'I went' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'More often than I was today' is incorrect; compare frequency with 'than I do now'. Suggestion: use 'went' for past habits and 'do now' for present habits. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I usually go to library to doing my assignments and also spend time reading book at the rivalry because I can concentrate and focus more on the.

✓ I usually go to the library to do my assignments and also spend time reading books in the reading room because I can concentrate and focus better there.

Multiple issues: 'to doing' mixes 'to' + gerund incorrectly; after 'to' with purpose use base verb 'do'. 'Library' needs the article 'the'. 'reading book' should be plural 'reading books'. 'at the rivalry' is likely a wrong word; 'reading room' or 'library' fits. 'more on the' is incomplete; use 'better there'. Suggestions: use 'to do' for purpose, include articles, pluralize 'books' when general, and use correct noun for location. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I have been through library very often when I was a kid compared to now that I have quite a heavy workload when I was a kid, I usually go there to use tablet and also borrow some books for free.

✓ I went to the library very often when I was a kid, compared to now when I have a heavy workload; when I was a kid I usually went there to use the tablet and also borrow some books for free.

Tense and auxiliary misuse: 'I have been through library' is incorrect for habitual past — use simple past 'I went'. Article missing: 'the library'. Mixing present perfect with 'when I was a kid' is inconsistent. 'I usually go there' should be past 'I usually went there'. Include 'the' before 'tablet' if specific. Suggestion: use simple past for past habits and keep articles. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I think Chinese student go to the library frequently because I have seen a lot of scene in the movie show that they often spend their time in library doing their assignment and tutoring.

✓ I think Chinese students go to the library frequently because I have seen many scenes in movies showing that they often spend their time in the library doing their assignments and attending tutoring.

Plural and quantifier errors: 'student' should be plural 'students'. 'a lot of scene' is wrong—use 'many scenes' or 'a lot of scenes'. 'movie show' is awkward; use 'movies showing'. Missing articles: 'in library' should be 'in the library'. 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments'. 'tutoring' is better as 'attending tutoring' or 'tutoring sessions'. Suggestion: pluralize nouns when referring to groups or repeated items, use correct quantifiers, and include articles. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× I think Chinese student go to the library frequently because I have seen a lot of scene in the movie show that they often spend their time in library doing their assignment and tutoring.

✓ I think Chinese students go to the library frequently because I have seen many scenes in movies showing that they often spend their time in the library doing their assignments and attending tutoring.

Subject-verb agreement: 'students go' is correct now; original 'student go' fails third-person singular/plural agreement. Ensure verb 'go' matches plural subject 'students'. Suggestion: always match singular subjects with singular verbs and plural subjects with plural verbs. Grammar problem type ID: 2