Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，比如“mid middle school”和“because I said period”不符合英语表达习惯。建议简化句子结构，明确表达时间和原因，同时避免重复。

예시: I used to buy shoes about twice a month when I was in middle school because I played basketball and needed different pairs for the sport.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“more cheaper”和句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的比较级表达，简洁明了地说明原因，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: Yes, I buy most of my shoes online because it is cheaper than in stores, and you can return them easily if they don't fit.

제안: 回答不够具体且表达混乱，数字使用不合理。建议直接说明通常花费的金额，并用连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: I usually spend around €100 on a pair of shoes because I want good quality without spending too much.

제안: 回答表达了观点和原因，但句子结构有些重复和不自然。建议简化表达，使用更地道的句型和词汇。

예시: I used to prefer fashionable shoes, but now I choose comfort because nothing is more important than how your feet feel.

× I used to like buying shoes in my mid middle school like twice a month because I said period.

✓ I used to like buying shoes in my middle school about twice a month because of that period.

句中“mid middle school”重复且不自然，应改为“middle school”；“like twice a month”中的“like”用法不当，应改为“about”表示大约；“because I said period”表达不清，应改为“because of that period”表示原因。

× I like playing basketball so I need lots of basketball shoes to wear.

✓ I like playing basketball so I need lots of basketball shoes to wear.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× Yes, most of my shoes were bought online because it's more cheaper than in the shoes store and you can return it anytime if you do if the shoes won't suit both to you.

✓ Yes, most of my shoes were bought online because it's cheaper than in the shoe store and you can return them anytime if the shoes don't suit you.

“more cheaper”是双重比较级，应改为“cheaper”；“in the shoes store”应为“in the shoe store”；“return it”指代不明，应改为“return them”；“if you do if the shoes won't suit both to you”表达混乱，应改为“if the shoes don't suit you”。

× Well, that's a huge amount of money I spend like. €1000 for a pair of shoes and it cost me a lot of money.

✓ Well, that's a huge amount of money. I spend about €1000 for a pair of shoes and it costs me a lot of money.

“like.”位置错误，应分句；“like €1000”应为“about €1000”；“it cost me”主谓不一致，应为“it costs me”。

× I used to prefer fashionable shoes, but nowadays I prefer comfortable shoes because now I realized nothing can compare to the comfortable about your feet.

✓ I used to prefer fashionable shoes, but nowadays I prefer comfortable shoes because now I realize nothing can compare to the comfort of your feet.

“now I realized”时态不符，应为“now I realize”；“the comfortable about your feet”表达错误，应为“the comfort of your feet”。