Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
I really love buying shoes. I love acquiring new pairs of shoes because they make me feel so good and they make my wardrobe aesthetically pleasing. They also give me this natural feel. So I would say any day and anytime that I really love acquiring.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Oh no, in my opinion I believe shoes sorted in person are way better than shoes sold online because I had a situation whereby I got a pair of shoes online and when it got delivered to me it wasn't what I ordered. So that experience made me cancel buying shoes online.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Most times, my expenditure on shoes often ranges to 22,000 naira per month. This is because I often purchase a new pair of heels every month, especially when I see a new design that captures my essence or that would be or that would boost my confidence.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I often time go for comfortable shoes because of the nature of my job. I would not be able to move around or easily commute in a fashionable show in my workplace, but a comfortable pair of shoes would make my day go as smooth as ever, for example.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is good but a bit repetitive and slightly unclear at the end. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say why you like shoes and how often you buy them clearly.
예시: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes because they boost my confidence and complement my wardrobe. I usually buy new pairs every month, especially when I find designs that suit my style.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect your ideas and by avoiding redundancy. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary to express your experience.
예시: No, I prefer buying shoes in person because once I ordered online and received the wrong pair. Since then, I have stopped buying shoes online to avoid such problems.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 78.0제안: Your answer provides good details but is a bit wordy and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to make your answer flow better. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases like 'often' and 'every month' too close together.
예시: I usually spend about 22,000 naira monthly on shoes because I like buying a new pair of heels whenever I find a design that suits my personality and boosts my confidence.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 82.0제안: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be improved by correcting minor grammar errors and using linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'for example' if you are not giving an example.
예시: I usually prefer comfortable shoes because my job requires a lot of moving around. Therefore, comfortable shoes help me commute easily and have a smooth day at work.
문법
× I had a situation whereby I got a pair of shoes online and when it got delivered to me it wasn't what I ordered.
✓ I had a situation whereby I got a pair of shoes online and when it was delivered to me it wasn't what I ordered.
The verb 'got delivered' is incorrect here; the correct past participle form 'was delivered' should be used to form the passive voice. 'Got' is informal and less appropriate in this context. Using 'was delivered' correctly indicates the passive action of the shoes being delivered to the speaker.
× I would not be able to move around or easily commute in a fashionable show in my workplace, but a comfortable pair of shoes would make my day go as smooth as ever, for example.
✓ I would not be able to move around or easily commute in a fashionable shoe in my workplace, but a comfortable pair of shoes would make my day go as smoothly as ever, for example.
The word 'show' is a typo and should be 'shoe' to refer to a single item. Also, 'as smooth as ever' should be 'as smoothly as ever' because 'smoothly' is an adverb modifying the verb 'go'. This correction ensures proper singular noun usage and correct adverb form for clarity and grammatical accuracy.
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