Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains hesitations. Try to give a direct response first, then add supporting details using linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

예시: I don't like buying shoes very much because I find it time-consuming. However, I enjoy choosing which shoes to buy when I do shop, although I don't buy them very often.

제안: Your answer is clear but very brief. You can improve by adding a reason or explanation to make your response more complete and natural.

예시: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on in stores to make sure they fit well.

제안: Your answer is a bit vague and could be more specific. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples using linking words.

예시: I usually don't spend a lot of money on shoes because I want to save money. However, I prefer original shoes since they are more durable and comfortable.

제안: Your answer is understandable but informal and lacks supporting details. Use linking words and provide reasons to make your answer more effective and natural.

예시: I like both fashionable and comfortable shoes; however, I prefer comfortable shoes because they are better for my feet, especially when I walk a lot.

× I like both but comfortable shoes is way better.

✓ I like both but comfortable shoes are way better.

The subject 'comfortable shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue, and correcting it ensures subject-verb agreement.