Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I do, because shoes are a important part of your outfit and I buy shoes before school, after school, for summer holidays and for winter.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
No, I usually buy things online but not shoes because I don't know the exact size that is connected with online shoe size so that I don't trust it.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Generally I pay about $100 on shoes.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
As I know from my life experience, I prefer fashionable shoes. That's in trend unfortunately, because to be comfortable is also very meaningful for me.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains a grammatical error ('a important' should be 'an important') and is slightly redundant with the repeated 'before school, after school'. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence.
예시: Yes, I like buying shoes because they are an important part of my outfit. I usually buy them seasonally, such as before school starts and for summer and winter holidays.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is understandable but a bit awkward and wordy. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
예시: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I find it hard to know the exact size, so I don't trust online shoe sizing.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is clear and concise but could be improved by adding a linking phrase or a reason to enrich the response.
예시: Generally, I spend about $100 on shoes because I prefer good quality that lasts longer.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrasing. Try to express your opinion more directly and use linking words to explain your thoughts clearly.
예시: Based on my experience, I prefer fashionable shoes because they are trendy; however, comfort is also very important to me.
문법
× Yes, I do, because shoes are a important part of your outfit and I buy shoes before school, after school, for summer holidays and for winter.
✓ Yes, I do, because shoes are an important part of your outfit and I buy shoes before school, after school, for summer holidays and for winter.
The error is the use of the article 'a' before a word starting with a vowel sound ('important'). The correct article is 'an' to ensure proper pronunciation and grammatical correctness.
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