Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

예시: I used to buy shoes quite often because I wanted them to match my outfits well. However, now I only buy shoes occasionally and usually stick to one or two comfortable pairs.

제안: 回答中有较多重复和犹豫词，影响流畅度。建议减少重复，使用连贯的句子，并注意时态和单复数形式。

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but my experience was not very good because I couldn't try them on before buying. When the package arrived, the shoes didn't fit me well, so I rarely buy shoes online now.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，数字表达不清晰。建议简化表达，明确数字，并避免重复。

예시: I usually stick to one or two pairs of comfortable and versatile shoes. I probably spend around 10,000 yuan a year on new shoes.

제안: 回答较简短且有犹豫词，建议扩展理由，使用更自然流畅的表达。

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because they allow me to wear them all day without any discomfort.

× I usually just wear that one or two pairs of shoes.

✓ I usually just wear one or two pairs of shoes.

这里的表达中，'that'用来修饰复数名词'pairs'是不正确的，应该直接用数量词'one or two pairs'，去掉'demonstrative adjective' 'that'。

× Well, in the past I often bought shoes because I want them to look harmoniously with my feet and my dress.

✓ Well, in the past I often bought shoes because I wanted them to look harmonious with my feet and my dress.

句子中描述过去的动作，主句用过去时'bought'，从句中也应使用过去时'wanted'。另外，'harmoniously'是副词，修饰动词，句中应使用形容词'harmonious'来修饰名词。

× I want them to look harmoniously with my feet and my dress.

✓ I want them to look harmonious with my feet and my dress.

'harmoniously'是副词，修饰动词，而这里需要形容词'harmonious'来修饰名词，表示鞋子和脚及衣服搭配协调。

× I usually stick to one or two pairs of shoe that is comfortable and versatile to wear.

✓ I usually stick to one or two pairs of shoes that are comfortable and versatile to wear.

'pairs'是复数，后面的名词'shoe'应改为复数'shoes'，谓语动词也应与复数主语一致，改为'are'。

× I probably say I would I would spend like umm 10,000 annually to buy new shoes.

✓ I would probably say I spend about 10,000 annually on buying new shoes.

'spend'后面应接介词'on'表示花费在某事上，'like'用法不当，改为'about'表示大约。

× So I never tried buying thing online.

✓ So I never tried buying things online.

'thing'应为复数形式'things'，因为这里泛指多件商品。

× because I, because as I bought online, I had no chance to uh, try it out, try it out before I, I bought it and when the, when the package arrived and I uh, and I tried them on it doesn't fit my feet that well.

✓ because when I bought online, I had no chance to try it out before I bought it, and when the package arrived and I tried them on, they didn't fit my feet that well.

句子中时态不一致，描述过去经历应统一用过去时，'doesn't fit'应改为'didn't fit'。

× and I uh, and I tried them on it doesn't fit my feet that well.

✓ and I tried them on, they didn't fit my feet that well.

'them'指复数鞋子，后面应使用复数代词'they'，而不是单数'it'。