Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I like buying shoes uh when I see the beautiful shoes uh I want to buy uh, if I don't say uh, I I maybe don't to buy buy some of shoes uh so uh, it looks the fashion.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes I bought shoes online because online shows it will be cheap and how many sales I I like to buy it online my friends.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Uh, because I don't have enough money, so when I bought shoes, I usually choose 100 or 200. Uh, it's uh, uh, uh, especially cheaper, uh, but uh, it comfortable for me. So I like UH-102100 shoes.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I prefer the fashion, no shoes because I'm a girl, I like to wear different dress and skirt, so I bought different shoes. Fashion no, it's my first choice. It can make me be fessional and beautiful.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中有较多的语气词和重复，影响表达的流畅性和自然性。建议减少无意义的填充词，使用完整且简洁的句子直接回答问题，并适当补充具体细节。
예시: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially when I see beautiful and fashionable ones. However, I don't buy shoes very often, only when I find something that really appeals to me.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法和句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，明确表达原因，并避免重复。
예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online because they are usually cheaper and there are many sales. I also like shopping online because my friends recommend it.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答中有很多语气词，表达不连贯且不具体。建议用简洁的句子说明预算范围，并描述鞋子的舒适性或其他特点。
예시: I usually spend around 100 to 200 yuan on shoes because I have a limited budget. I prefer shoes that are comfortable and affordable.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接表达偏好，并用具体理由支持，同时注意语法和词汇的准确使用。
예시: I prefer fashionable shoes because I enjoy matching them with different dresses and skirts. Wearing stylish shoes makes me feel confident and beautiful.
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