Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有较多的语气词“uh”，影响了表达的流畅性和自然度。建议减少重复和无意义的填充词，直接表达观点，并且句子结构需要更完整和清晰。

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially when I see beautiful and fashionable ones. However, I don't buy shoes very often, only when I find something that really appeals to me.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子表达原因，并且避免重复。

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online because they are usually cheaper and there are many sales. Also, my friends often recommend good online stores.

제안: 回答中有很多语气词，表达不清晰，数字和描述混乱。建议用简洁明了的句子说明预算和选择鞋子的标准。

예시: I usually spend around 100 to 200 yuan on shoes because I have a limited budget. I prefer shoes that are affordable but also comfortable to wear.

제안: 回答中表达不够连贯，有语法错误和词汇使用不当。建议用清晰的句子表达偏好，并说明原因。

예시: I prefer fashionable shoes because I enjoy matching them with different dresses and skirts. Wearing stylish shoes makes me feel confident and beautiful.

× if I don't say uh, I I maybe don't to buy buy some of shoes uh so uh, it looks the fashion.

✓ if I don't say uh, I maybe don't buy some shoes uh so uh, it looks fashionable.

这里'some of shoes'中的'of'是不必要的，应该用'some shoes'。另外，'looks the fashion'应改为'looks fashionable'，因为这里需要形容词形式。

× Yes I bought shoes online because online shows it will be cheap and how many sales I I like to buy it online my friends.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online because online shops are cheap and have many sales. I like to buy online like my friends.

'online shows'应为'online shops'，'shows'是错误的名词使用。'how many sales'应为'have many sales'，表示有很多促销活动。句子结构也需要调整以表达清楚。

× Uh, because I don't have enough money, so when I bought shoes, I usually choose 100 or 200.

✓ Uh, because I don't have enough money, so when I buy shoes, I usually choose ones that cost 100 or 200.

这里描述的是习惯动作，应该用一般现在时'buy'和'choose'，而不是过去时'bought'和'choose'。

× Uh, it's uh, uh, uh, especially cheaper, uh, but uh, it comfortable for me.

✓ Uh, it's especially cheap, but it is comfortable for me.

'especially cheaper'中'cheaper'是比较级，前面没有比较对象，应使用原级'adjective'即'cheap'。另外，'it comfortable'缺少动词'is'。

× So I like UH-102100 shoes.

✓ So I like UH-102100 shoes.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× I prefer the fashion, no shoes because I'm a girl, I like to wear different dress and skirt, so I bought different shoes.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because I'm a girl. I like to wear different dresses and skirts, so I buy different shoes.

'the fashion, no shoes'应为'fashionable shoes'。'different dress and skirt'应为复数形式'dresses and skirts'。另外，时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时。

× Fashion no, it's my first choice.

✓ Fashionable shoes are my first choice.

'Fashion no'不正确，应使用形容词形式'fashionable shoes'。句子结构也需调整。

× It can make me be fessional and beautiful.

✓ It can make me feel professional and beautiful.

'be fessional'是拼写错误，应为'feel professional'，表示感受专业和美丽。