Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng để thể hiện ý muốn mua giày bao nhiêu lần trong tháng.

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy one pair every month.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ trải nghiệm mua hàng trực tuyến, đồng thời dùng từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả cảm nhận về sản phẩm.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online, usually from TikTok shops. The delivery is very fast, but I can't feel the texture, so I can't choose carefully.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ số tiền bạn chi tiêu và tránh nói lặp lại hoặc không liên quan.

예시: I usually spend about 1,000,000 to 2,000,000 Vietnamese Dong on shoes because I don't want to spend too much.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy giải thích lý do bạn thích giày thoải mái hơn một cách mạch lạc và có liên kết.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually go to school and don't follow fashion trends. Comfort is more important for my daily life.

× I'm not really like just one a month.

✓ I don't really like buying just one a month.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm not really like' which is not grammatically correct. The correct form is 'I don't really like' to express dislike. Also, 'just one a month' needs to be connected properly to the verb 'buying' to make sense.

× Yes I have I usually buy on a subway or tick tock shop and it's really fast of delivery but I cannot use the the texture or something.

✓ Yes, I have. I usually buy on Subway or TikTok shops, and the delivery is really fast, but I cannot feel the texture or something.

The original sentence lacks proper punctuation and has awkward phrasing. 'I have' should be separated as a complete sentence. 'Subway' and 'TikTok' are proper nouns and should be capitalized. 'Fast of delivery' is incorrect; it should be 'the delivery is really fast'. 'Cannot use the texture' is unclear; 'cannot feel the texture' is more appropriate.

× I mean I don't have I don't I can't choose much.

✓ I mean, I don't have much choice; I can't choose much.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. It should be combined into a clearer sentence. 'I don't have much choice' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× I don't want to spend too much, so I just usually spend like 1000 or two, 2000 Vietnamese, Vietnam Dong.

✓ I don't want to spend too much, so I usually spend around 1000 to 2000 Vietnamese Dong.

The phrase 'like 1000 or two, 2000' is confusing and incorrect. 'Around 1000 to 2000' is a clearer and grammatically correct way to express the amount. Also, 'Vietnamese Dong' is the correct currency name.

× And it's like the it's just how many years I know.

✓ And that's just how much I know after many years.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the intended meaning, indicating the speaker's knowledge accumulated over years.

× I refer comfortable shoes more because I don't usually wear fashion style.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes more because I don't usually wear fashionable styles.

'I refer' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'prefer'. 'Fashion style' should be 'fashionable styles' to be grammatically correct.

× I'm just I just need more comfortable on my daily life.

✓ I just need to be more comfortable in my daily life.

The phrase 'need more comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'need to be more comfortable'. Also, the correct preposition is 'in' for 'daily life'.

× I just because I just go to school and I go to school I'm not much on Internet or don't need to fashion.

✓ It's just because I go to school, and I'm not much on the Internet or interested in fashion.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. The correction combines ideas into a coherent sentence and corrects 'not much on Internet' to 'not much on the Internet' and 'don't need to fashion' to 'not interested in fashion'.