Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes, especially as a way to reward myself whenever I achieve a personal goal. I usually buy new shoes every few months.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes, I have bought shoes online from a popular shopping website. I find it very convenient because I can easily compare different style and prices without going to the store.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually spend between 500,000 and 1,000,000 thousand Vietnam down on 2. Because I prefer buying comfortable and durable 1.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I prefer comfortable shoes because I often have to stand or walk for a long time, so. Comfortable to help me prevent pain on foot.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 85.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn có thể thêm một số chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú và hấp dẫn hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes, especially as a way to reward myself whenever I achieve a personal goal. For instance, after completing a challenging project at work, I treat myself to a new pair. I usually buy new shoes every few months, depending on my needs and occasions.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 80.0제안: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, nhưng câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về trải nghiệm mua sắm trực tuyến.
예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online from a popular shopping website. It is very convenient because I can easily compare different styles and prices without going to the store. Moreover, I can read customer reviews which help me make better choices.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 50.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do chi tiêu của bạn.
예시: I usually spend between 500,000 and 1,000,000 Vietnamese dong on shoes because I prefer buying comfortable and durable ones that can last a long time.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu sự liên kết giữa các ý. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often have to stand or walk for a long time. Therefore, comfortable shoes help me prevent foot pain and keep me active throughout the day.
문법
× I find it very convenient because I can easily compare different style and prices without going to the store.
✓ I find it very convenient because I can easily compare different styles and prices without going to the store.
The word 'style' should be plural 'styles' to agree with 'prices' and to correctly indicate multiple types being compared.
× I usually spend between 500,000 and 1,000,000 thousand Vietnam down on 2. Because I prefer buying comfortable and durable 1.
✓ I usually spend between 500,000 and 1,000,000 Vietnamese dong on shoes because I prefer buying comfortable and durable ones.
The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear expressions like 'Vietnam down on 2' and 'durable 1'. It should be restructured into a complete sentence with correct currency name 'Vietnamese dong' and proper reference to 'ones' for shoes.
× Comfortable to help me prevent pain on foot.
✓ Comfortable shoes help me prevent pain in my feet.
The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. It should be a complete sentence with subject 'Comfortable shoes' and verb 'help'. Also, 'pain on foot' should be 'pain in my feet' for natural expression.
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