Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words like 'uh'. Try to be more direct and clear by stating your preference and frequency without hesitation. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'buy a series' and explain what you mean by 'personalities'.

예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because they help express my personal style. I usually buy a new pair about once a month.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'vessels', 'charging in the Rats', and 'bought one year'. Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question, and provide specific details about your online purchase.

예시: Yes, I recently bought a pair of sneakers online. They looked great and were very affordable.

제안: Your answer is unclear and mixes 'shoes' and 'suits'. Avoid filler words and be specific about the amount and reasons for spending money on shoes. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I usually spend around two to three thousand dollars on shoes because they improve my appearance and boost my confidence.

제안: Your answer confuses 'shoes' with 'suits' and contains filler words. Be sure to answer the question directly, use correct vocabulary, and provide clear reasons with linking words.

예시: I usually prefer comfortable shoes because when my shoes are comfortable, I feel confident and can walk long distances without any problems.

× I'd like to buy a series because, uh, it gives me very good, uh, personalities and I buy one once a month.

✓ I'd like to buy a series because, uh, it gives me very good, uh, personality and I buy one once a month.

The word 'personalities' is incorrect here because 'personality' is an uncountable noun when referring to a person's character traits. Using 'personalities' (plural) is incorrect in this context. The correct form is 'personality.'

× Yes, I bought vessels online recently when I was charging in the Rats and I bought one year and which was very good looking and very cheap.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online recently when I was shopping in the mall and I bought one pair which was very good looking and very cheap.

The word 'vessels' is incorrect for shoes; 'shoes' is the correct noun. 'Charging in the Rats' is unclear and likely a mishearing or mistranslation; 'shopping in the mall' fits the context better. 'I bought one year' is incorrect; it should be 'I bought one pair.' Also, 'and which was' is redundant; 'which was' suffices. The pronouns and nouns need to be corrected for clarity and accuracy.

× I usually spend two to three thousands on my suits because, uh, it gives me, uh, attractive looks and uh, way of uh, gives me confidence. So I buy shoes.

✓ I usually spend two to three thousand on my shoes because, uh, they give me attractive looks and, uh, a way of giving me confidence. So I buy shoes.

The phrase 'two to three thousands' is incorrect; 'thousand' should be singular when used after numbers like 'two to three.' Also, 'suits' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'shoes.' The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'shoes' which is plural, so 'they' is correct. The phrase 'way of uh, gives me confidence' is awkward and should be 'a way of giving me confidence.'

× Usually I prefer comfortable suits, uh, because, uh, when we were comfortable suits, we feel very confident and we can travel anywhere without any difficulties.

✓ Usually I prefer comfortable shoes, uh, because, uh, when we wear comfortable shoes, we feel very confident and we can travel anywhere without any difficulties.

The word 'suits' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes' to match the context. Also, 'when we were comfortable suits' is incorrect; it should be 'when we wear comfortable shoes.' The verb 'were' is past tense and does not fit here; 'wear' is the correct present tense verb.