Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I like buying shoes. I think once a month or twice a month.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes online because it's very helpful with the application and payment method. So I can wait at my home and the shoes or the package will be arrive.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Probably like 1000 rupiah and more.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I think both because fashionable shoes match every dress or every clothes that I have and comfortable shoes I can wear it every day. I think it's important to invest in the shoes that comfortable shoes one.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 75.0제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi Anda bisa membuatnya lebih alami dan efektif dengan menggabungkan kedua kalimat menjadi satu kalimat yang lebih lancar dan menambahkan sedikit detail untuk memperkaya jawaban.
예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually do so once or twice a month to keep my collection updated.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 70.0제안: Jawaban Anda sudah menjawab pertanyaan, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang kurang alami. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas serta perbaiki tata bahasa agar lebih efektif.
예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes online because the app is easy to use and the payment process is convenient. This way, I can stay at home and wait for the shoes to be delivered.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 50.0제안: Jawaban Anda kurang spesifik dan tidak jelas. Sebaiknya berikan jawaban yang lebih tepat dan lengkap dengan menyebutkan kisaran harga yang realistis dan relevan.
예시: I usually spend around 500,000 to 1,000,000 rupiah on a pair of shoes, depending on the brand and quality.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 65.0제안: Jawaban Anda sudah mengandung ide yang baik, tetapi kalimatnya kurang terstruktur dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan menggunakan kata penghubung untuk mengalirkan ide dengan baik.
예시: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes because fashionable ones match my outfits, while comfortable shoes are suitable for daily wear. Therefore, I believe it's important to invest in comfortable shoes.
문법
× So I can wait at my home and the shoes or the package will be arrive.
✓ So I can wait at my home and the shoes or the package will arrive.
The verb 'arrive' should be in its base form after the modal verb 'will'. Using 'be arrive' is incorrect because 'arrive' is not a past participle and does not require 'be' in this context.
× I think both because fashionable shoes match every dress or every clothes that I have and comfortable shoes I can wear it every day.
✓ I think both because fashionable shoes match every dress or every piece of clothing that I have and comfortable shoes I can wear every day.
The word 'clothes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'every'. Instead, 'every piece of clothing' is correct to express singularity. Also, 'wear it every day' is redundant; 'wear every day' is sufficient.
× I think both because fashionable shoes match every dress or every clothes that I have and comfortable shoes I can wear it every day.
✓ I think both because fashionable shoes match every dress or every piece of clothing that I have and comfortable shoes I can wear every day.
The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here because 'comfortable shoes' is plural. The sentence should omit 'it' to maintain correct pronoun usage.
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