Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like 'a bigger fan' and improve sentence flow. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't particularly enjoy buying shoes, so I usually purchase sneakers once or twice a year to ensure I have suitable pairs for each season.

제안: Your response is understandable but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid sentence fragments and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, use more precise vocabulary such as 'discounted websites' or 'websites offering discounts'.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times, especially running or training shoes, because I often find websites offering good discounts.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use clearer expressions and correct grammar. For example, say 'good quality' instead of 'good conditions'. Also, use linking words to explain your reasoning.

예시: Because I don't buy shoes frequently, I prefer to invest in good quality pairs, so I usually spend over €100 on each pair.

제안: Your answer is too long and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid informal contractions like 'cause' in formal speaking.

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I work long hours, so it's important that my feet feel well rested after a busy day.

× I'm not particularly a bigger fan of buying shoes.

✓ I'm not particularly a big fan of buying shoes.

The phrase 'a bigger fan' is incorrect here because 'bigger' is a comparative adjective and requires a comparison object. The correct expression is 'a big fan' to indicate liking something. Using 'bigger' without comparison is grammatically incorrect.

× I often go online to find some website with discount.

✓ I often go online to find some websites with discounts.

The phrase 'some website with discount' is incorrect because 'website' should be plural 'websites' when using 'some' and 'discount' should be plural 'discounts' to indicate multiple offers. Also, 'with discount' is less natural than 'with discounts' in this context.

× That's why I often spend €100 even more on a pair of shoes.

✓ That's why I often spend €100 or even more on a pair of shoes.

The phrase '€100 even more' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is '€100 or even more' to indicate the amount spent could be €100 or higher. This clarifies the quantifier usage.

× Well, I'd definitely prefer comfortable shoes to shoes with good design 'cause I just need to work a lot on my daily life so it is so important for me to have the shoes and could make me feel my feet is well rested after a long day.

✓ Well, I'd definitely prefer comfortable shoes to shoes with good design because I need to work a lot in my daily life, so it is very important for me to have shoes that make my feet feel well rested after a long day.

The original sentence has multiple issues: the use of informal ''cause' should be 'because'; 'work a lot on my daily life' should be 'work a lot in my daily life'; 'have the shoes and could make me feel my feet is well rested' is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence improves clarity, grammar, and flow by restructuring and correcting verb forms and pronouns.