Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用"really"，并且注意单复数形式。可以先直接回答问题，再补充原因。

예시: I don't often buy shoes. I only buy them when I find a pair that I really like. Otherwise, I don't feel the need to collect different styles.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复词汇，并且完整表达原因。

예시: No, I rarely buy shoes online. I prefer shopping in physical stores because I can try the shoes on to make sure they fit well.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免重复。

예시: I haven't calculated exactly, but I don't spend much on shoes. I only buy them when I really need or like a pair.

제안: 回答不够清晰，存在语法和词汇错误。建议明确表达偏好，使用恰当的词汇，并且避免模糊和错误的表达。

예시: I like both fashionable and comfortable shoes. For example, I wear fashionable shoes when I go out, but I choose comfortable shoes for activities like hiking.

× If I really found a shoes that I really wanted I would buy it

✓ If I really found a shoe that I really wanted, I would buy it

这里的'shoes'是复数，但前面用了不定冠词'a'，表示单数，应该用单数形式'shoe'。

× but if not I don't have that happy like to collect the different style of the shoes and just buy it for my.

✓ but if not, I don't have that happiness to collect different styles of shoes and just buy them for myself.

句中'like'用错，应为名词'happiness'；'style'应为复数'styles'；'the shoes'前不需要定冠词；'it'指代不明确，应改为复数'them'；'for my'应为'for myself'。

× No, I seldom bought shoes from online.

✓ No, I seldom buy shoes online.

'seldom'表示频率副词，通常与一般现在时连用，表示习惯性动作，故应使用一般现在时'buy'。

× I like to buy the things in person, so I prefer to to go the offline shopping.

✓ I like to buy things in person, so I prefer to go offline shopping.

'the things'中'the'多余，应去掉；'to to'重复，应去掉一个'to'；'the offline shopping'中'the'多余，应去掉。

× And of course the size of the shoes, I have to try it right? So that's why I bought it from.

✓ And of course, I have to try the size of the shoes, right? So that's why I buy them in person.

句子结构混乱，'I have to try it'中的'it'指代不明，应明确为'the size of the shoes'；'bought it from'不完整，应改为'buy them in person'以表达意思。

× Well, I didn't calculated of it, but I can say maybe not too much.

✓ Well, I haven't calculated it, but I can say maybe not too much.

'didn't calculated'错误，助动词'did'后应接动词原形'calculate'；这里用现在完成时更合适，表示到目前为止的状态。

× Like I mentioned just now, I seldom buy the shoes.

✓ Like I mentioned just now, I seldom buy shoes.

'the shoes'前不需要定冠词，且此处泛指鞋子，应使用复数形式'shoes'。

× I just buy it when I really need it or I really like it.

✓ I just buy them when I really need them or I really like them.

'it'指代鞋子，鞋子为复数，应使用复数代词'them'。

× I prefer both and I can say in my shoes were dropped.

✓ I prefer both, and I can say I have both kinds of shoes.

原句语法混乱，'in my shoes were dropped'无意义，应改为表达拥有两种鞋子的句子。

× Sometimes if I need to feed my fitting on that day I need a fashionable shoes,

✓ Sometimes if I need to feel comfortable on that day, I need fashionable shoes,

'feed my fitting'表达错误，应为'feel comfortable'；'a fashionable shoes'中'a'与复数'shoes'不匹配，应去掉'a'。

× but on the other hand if I go hiking I need a convention.

✓ but on the other hand, if I go hiking, I need comfortable shoes.

'convention'用词错误，应为形容词'comfortable'来描述鞋子。